Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınız təbii və emosional olsa da, bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi mövcuddur. Məsələn, "it just make my mood higher" ifadəsi "it just makes my mood better" kimi düzəldilə bilər. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın və sözləri düzgün formda istifadə edin.

例: I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel free and lifts my mood. When I sing, I feel motivated and all my tiredness disappears.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər var, məsələn, "didn't have a professional help" ifadəsi "haven't had professional help" olmalıdır. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha yaxşı əlaqələndirmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.

例: Actually, I haven't had professional singing lessons, but I used to sing a lot as a child because I loved it. Although I don't sing much now, I still enjoy it and feel I don't need formal training.

提案: Cavabınız aydın və məntiqlidir, amma "therefore" kimi keçid sözünü cümlənin əvvəlində istifadə etmək daha təbii olar. Həmçinin, "a little bit anxious and stressful" ifadəsi "a little anxious and stressed" kimi daha düzgün olardı.

例: I'm actually quite shy about singing, so I prefer not to sing in front of many people. Instead, I like to sing alone for myself because singing in front of others makes me a little anxious and stressed.

提案: Cümlənizdə qrammatik səhvlər və söz sırası problemləri var. Məsələn, "for myself I when I sing" ifadəsi qarışıqdır. Daha aydın ifadə və keçid sözləri istifadə edin.

例: I absolutely agree because when I sing, my spirits lift, and I believe singing brings happiness to others as well.

× Well I absolutely like singing because I feel free and boundless when I sing and it just make my mood higher and it increases my motivation and all my tiredness are just ****.

✓ Well I absolutely like singing because I feel free and boundless when I sing and it just makes my mood higher and it increases my motivation and all my tiredness just disappear.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'all my tiredness are' is incorrect because 'tiredness' is uncountable and singular, so it should be 'all my tiredness just disappears' or 'just disappears'. The original sentence had a missing verb for 'all my tiredness are just ****', so I corrected it to 'just disappear' for clarity.

× Actually, no, I didn't have a professional help from singers, but I used to sing when I was a child and I love singing back then.

✓ Actually, no, I didn't have professional help from singers, but I used to sing when I was a child and I loved singing back then.

The phrase 'didn't have a professional help' is incorrect because 'help' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'I love singing back then' is incorrect because 'back then' refers to the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'loved'.

× Well, I'm actually a shy person about singing, therefore I don't like singing in front of a lot of people.

✓ Well, I'm actually a shy person when it comes to singing, therefore I don't like singing in front of a lot of people.

The phrase 'a shy person about singing' is unnatural. The correct expression is 'a shy person when it comes to singing' to indicate the topic or context of shyness.

× I absolutely agree with this idea because for myself I when I sing my spirit just lifts and I think it's same for the other people too.

✓ I absolutely agree with this idea because for me, when I sing, my spirit just lifts and I think it's the same for other people too.

The phrase 'for myself I when I sing' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'for me, when I sing'. Also, 'it's same' should be 'it's the same'. The article 'the' is needed before 'same'. 'The other people' is better as 'other people' in this context.