Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I really like seeing because it makes me feel so better from stress and I can make friends when I singing with interest.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Actually, I singing everywhere every time but I. I have learned how to think regularly and practically because I don't have time to practice.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
You know, I want to sing for everyone. You can say that is a public audience. I feel so better when I say.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Absolutely, yes. I think when I sing, bring in the film, that makes people feel happy and relaxing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'seeing' thay vì 'singing' và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress and I can make friends when I sing with others who share the same interest.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo câu có cấu trúc đúng.
例: I enjoy singing everywhere, but I haven't had formal lessons because I don't have much time to practice regularly.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 45.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'say' thay vì 'sing'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.
例: I want to sing for everyone, like a public audience, because it makes me feel happy and confident.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh các cụm từ không phù hợp như 'bring in the film'.
例: Absolutely. I believe singing can bring happiness and help people relax because music often lifts our mood.
文法
× Yes, I really like seeing because it makes me feel so better from stress and I can make friends when I singing with interest.
✓ Yes, I really like singing because it makes me feel much better from stress and I can make friends when I sing with interest.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' not 'seeing'. Also, 'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing' because after 'when' we use the base form for present tense. 'So better' is incorrect; it should be 'much better' to express improvement.
× Actually, I singing everywhere every time but I. I have learned how to think regularly and practically because I don't have time to practice.
✓ Actually, I sing everywhere all the time, but I have learned how to think regularly and practically because I don't have time to practice.
'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing' as the simple present tense is used for habitual actions. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context. The sentence 'but I.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed.
× You know, I want to sing for everyone. You can say that is a public audience. I feel so better when I say.
✓ You know, I want to sing for everyone. You can say that it is a public audience. I feel much better when I sing.
'Say' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'sing'. 'So better' should be 'much better' to correctly express improvement. Also, 'that is' should be 'that it is' for clarity.
× Absolutely, yes. I think when I sing, bring in the film, that makes people feel happy and relaxing.
✓ Absolutely, yes. I think when I sing in films, it makes people feel happy and relaxed.
The phrase 'bring in the film' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'sing in films' to convey the intended meaning. 'Relaxing' should be 'relaxed' because it describes how people feel, not what they do.
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