Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），影响了表达的自然性和准确性。此外，句子结构稍显简单，建议注意拼写并丰富句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Absolutely yes. I think singing helps people express their emotions and relieve stress. I often participate in karaoke sessions with my friends, which helps strengthen our relationships.

提案: 回答中存在时态混用和拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议注意时态一致性，纠正拼写，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I had the opportunity to join my secondary school choir, where we practiced regularly. Now, I usually enjoy singing as my hobby.

提案: 回答中拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构较复杂但缺少适当的连接词，建议纠正拼写，简化句子结构并使用连接词提高表达的连贯性。

例: Definitely my friends. They are very friendly, and when we have karaoke nights together, they sincerely appreciate my singing and always give me honest feedback.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（"belongings"应为"belonging"，"karaoke are"应为"karaoke is"），且最后一句表达不清晰，建议注意语法正确性，避免表达模糊，并丰富细节使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it allows people to come together and create a sense of community and belonging. Additionally, karaoke is popular because it brings joy and helps people relax.

× Absolutely yes. I think seeing can help people express their emotions and relieve pressure.

✓ Absolutely yes. I think singing can help people express their emotions and relieve pressure.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但句意应为'唱歌'，正确的词是'singing'。'seeing'意为'看见'，与语境不符。

× I always take part in the karaoke sessions with my friends. It was helpful to bound our relationship.

✓ I always take part in the karaoke sessions with my friends. It was helpful to bond our relationship.

'bound'是'bind'的过去式或过去分词，意为'绑'，此处应使用动词原形'bond'，表示'建立'关系。

× It was helpful to bound our relationship.

✓ It was helpful to bond our relationship.

句中'bound'用法错误，应为动词原形'bond'，表示'建立'关系。

× Yes, I had had the opportunity to be part of my secondary school choir and we used to practice regularly and now I usually enjoy seeing as my hobby.

✓ Yes, I had the opportunity to be part of my secondary school choir and we used to practice regularly and now I usually enjoy singing as my hobby.

'had had'时态使用不当，简单过去时'had'即可；'seeing'应为'singing'，表示'唱歌'。

× Yes, I had had the opportunity to be part of my secondary school choir and we used to practice regularly and now I usually enjoy seeing as my hobby.

✓ Yes, I had the opportunity to be part of my secondary school choir and we used to practice regularly and now I usually enjoy singing as my hobby.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示'唱歌'，符合语境。

× Definitely my friends, you know, they are so friendly that when we are in the karaoke night together, they often sincerely appreciate my seeing and they always give me honest feedback.

✓ Definitely my friends, you know, they are so friendly that when we are in the karaoke night together, they often sincerely appreciate my singing and they always give me honest feedback.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示'唱歌'，符合语境。

× And additionally, karaoke are popular because it can bring joy to money.

✓ And additionally, karaoke is popular because it can bring joy to many.

'karaoke'作为不可数名词，谓语应使用单数'is'；'money'应为'many'，表示'许多'，符合语境。

× And additionally, karaoke are popular because it can bring joy to money.

✓ And additionally, karaoke is popular because it can bring joy to many.

'money'表示'钱'，与句意不符，应使用'many'表示'许多人'。