Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“very like singing”应为“really like singing”，且“say some thoughts”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I love listening to different kinds of music, and singing allows me to express my feelings through beautiful melodies.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“learned how to see”应为“learned how to sing”，“source”用词不当。建议注意词汇的准确性，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Actually, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I usually follow the rhythm when I listen to songs. Moreover, I watch online tutorials to practice special techniques like better breathing to improve my singing skills.

提案: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误，如“see some classic music for my”表达不完整。建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，避免语法错误。

例: I would like to sing for the audience at my college's singing competitions because I enjoy performing classic songs that many people appreciate.

提案: 回答中“Seeing”应为“Singing”，且有拼写错误。建议注意拼写和用词准确，同时使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and connect with others. For instance, people often sing at celebrations like birthdays or parties, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, of course, I very like singing because there are a variety of sources that I very enjoy listening to and I often say some thoughts with beautiful melodies.

✓ Yes, of course, I like singing very much because there are a variety of sources that I enjoy listening to very much and I often say some thoughts with beautiful melodies.

在英语中，副词“very”通常放在形容词或副词前，而不能直接修饰动词“like”或“enjoy”。正确用法是“like singing very much”或“enjoy listening to very much”。

× Actually, I haven't formally learned how to see, but I usually follow the rhythm of the source when I listen to them.

✓ Actually, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I usually follow the rhythm of the source when I listen to them.

这里“see”是拼写错误，正确的动词应该是“sing”，表示“唱歌”。

× Actually, I wish I could have a choice to sing at the stage of college singing competitions.

✓ Actually, I wish I could have a chance to sing on the stage of college singing competitions.

“have a choice to”用法不当，应该用“have a chance to”表示“有机会做某事”。此外，“at the stage”应改为“on the stage”，因为“on the stage”表示在舞台上。

× I want to see some classic music for my.

✓ I want to sing some classic music for myself.

“see”用错，应该是“sing”，表示“唱歌”。“for my”不完整，正确用法是“for myself”，表示“为我自己”。

× Seeing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and connect with others.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and connect with others.

“Seeing”是“看”的意思，语境中应为“唱歌”，正确词为“Singing”。

× For example, people often see at celebrations like birthdays or parties, which creates A joyful atmosphere.

✓ For example, people often sing at celebrations like birthdays or parties, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

“see”用错，应为“sing”，表示“唱歌”。此外，“A”应小写为“a”，因为它不是专有名词开头。