Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and contains a grammatical error ('a good vibes' should be 'good vibes'). To improve, try to give a complete sentence with correct grammar and add a reason using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it gives me good vibes and helps me relax after a long day.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and redundancy ('I have' repeated). To improve, respond directly with correct grammar and use linking words to explain your interest clearly.

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I am very interested in learning it because I believe it will improve my confidence.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'see you later'. To improve, focus on answering the question directly with clear reasons and avoid unnecessary words.

例: I want to sing for myself to lift my mood and keep myself happy, as singing helps me feel better.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat confusing. To improve, use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and spread love to others.

× It gives me a good vibes.

✓ It gives me good vibes.

The word 'vibes' is plural, so the singular article 'a' should not be used before it. The correct phrase is 'good vibes' without 'a'.

× No, I never have learned to sing, but I have a good interest to learn it.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing, but I have a strong interest in learning it.

The adverb 'never' should be placed between 'have' and the past participle 'learned' to form the correct present perfect tense. Also, 'a good interest to learn it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a strong interest in learning it'.

× I have a good interest to learn it.

✓ I have a good interest in learning it.

The verb 'interest' is followed by the preposition 'in' and the gerund form of the verb, so 'interest in learning' is correct, not 'interest to learn'. Also, 'learning' is preferred over 'to learn' in this context.

× I want to sing for my uplifting mode, see you later.

✓ I want to sing to uplift my mood. See you later.

The phrase 'my uplifting mode' is incorrect; it should be 'my mood'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× I just want to sing for myself to be to keep my myself happy.

✓ I just want to sing for myself to keep myself happy.

The phrase 'to be to keep my myself happy' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'to keep myself happy'. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used once appropriately.

× It's a way of keep your emotions out in in some ways singing singing can spread love over two couple of.

✓ It's a way of keeping your emotions out. In some ways, singing can spread love to a couple of people.

The phrase 'way of keep' should be 'way of keeping' (gerund form). The sentence was also unclear and had repeated words. 'Spread love over two couple of' is incorrect; it should be 'spread love to a couple of people'. Prepositions and sentence structure were corrected for clarity.