Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不连贯的问题，句子过于零散，缺乏连贯性。建议练习使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. However, I enjoy listening to music because it helps me relax. Singing in front of people makes me feel nervous and embarrassed since I'm not confident about my voice.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子断裂且用词不准确。建议加强句子结构练习，使用完整句子表达思想，并注意词汇的准确使用。

例: No, I haven't. Our institution offers courses where students can learn how to sing, but I haven't taken any because I feel shy and self-conscious when singing.

提案: 回答中句子断断续续，表达不连贯，且存在语法错误。建议练习用完整句子表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think I only want to sing for myself because I'm not good at singing and feel self-conscious and embarrassed in front of others, so I usually avoid singing in public.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I do. Singing is a great way to unwind after a busy day and helps us feel at ease. Additionally, singing can stimulate the brain to produce more dopamine, a chemical that boosts happiness and creates a sense of pleasure.

× Which makes me relaxed.

✓ This makes me relaxed.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应补充主语使句子完整。

× Singing.

✓ Singing makes me relaxed.

单独的动名词短语不能构成完整句子，应补充谓语使句子完整。

× In front of people makes me feel a bit nervous and embarrassed to see.

✓ Singing in front of people makes me feel a bit nervous and embarrassed.

句子缺少主语，且“embarrassed to see”表达不当，应调整句子结构和用词。

× All our institution provides courses where students can learn how to sing songs.

✓ Our institution provides courses where students can learn how to sing songs.

“All”用法不当，且句子结构不自然，应去掉“all”使句子通顺。

× I don't take any of them as I really feel shy and.

✓ I don't take any of them as I really feel shy.

句子末尾多余的“and”导致句子不完整，应删除。

× A self conscious when singing songs.

✓ I feel self-conscious when singing songs.

“self conscious”应为形容词短语，需加动词和主语构成完整句子。

× I think I only want to sing.

✓ I think I only want to sing for myself.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。

× For myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

单独的介词短语不能构成完整句子，应补充主语和谓语。

× I think I'll avoid sing songs.

✓ I think I'll avoid singing songs.

“avoid”后应接动名词形式，不能接动词原形。

× Thing is a great way to unwind after a busy day and makes us feel at ease.

✓ Singing is a great way to unwind after a busy day and makes us feel at ease.

“Thing”用词错误，应为“Singing”表示“唱歌”。

× Additionally, sing can also stimulate the brain to produce more dopamine, a chemical that boosts happiness and creates a sense of pleasure.

✓ Additionally, singing can also stimulate the brain to produce more dopamine, a chemical that boosts happiness and creates a sense of pleasure.

“sing”应使用动名词形式“singing”作为主语。