Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. For example, say "No, I don't like singing because I don't think I sing well." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: No, I don't like singing because I don't think I sing well.

提案: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Make sure to answer the question directly and use correct verb forms. Also, list your hobbies clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Actually, I have never learned how to sing because singing is not one of my hobbies. My hobbies are writing, reading books, playing video games, and going to the gym."

例: Actually, I have never learned how to sing because singing is not one of my hobbies. My hobbies are writing, reading books, playing video games, and going to the gym.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding filler words like "umm." Also, clarify your intention with a smoother sentence. For example, "If I could sing, I would sing for my girlfriend to show her how much I love her."

例: If I could sing, I would sing for my girlfriend to show her how much I love her.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more coherent by using better linking words and clearer vocabulary. For example, say "In my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people, but it depends on the type of song, whether it's sad, happy, romantic, or something else."

例: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people, but it depends on the type of song, whether it's sad, happy, romantic, or something else.

× No I don't because my sound isn't as good as I can singing.

✓ No, I don't because my voice isn't as good as I can sing.

The phrase 'I can singing' is incorrect because after a modal verb like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'sound' should be 'voice' to better express the meaning.

× Actually, I have never learned how to think because the singing isn't my hobbies and my hobbies is writing, reading books, playing video games or go to the gym like this.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing because singing isn't my hobby and my hobbies are writing, reading books, playing video games, or going to the gym.

The word 'think' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing'. 'Hobbies' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. Also, 'go to the gym like this' is awkward; 'going to the gym' fits better in the list. Additionally, 'singing isn't my hobbies' should be 'singing isn't my hobby' because 'singing' is singular.

× Actually, I have never learned how to think because the singing isn't my hobbies and my hobbies is writing, reading books, playing video games or go to the gym like this.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing because singing isn't my hobby and my hobbies are writing, reading books, playing video games, or going to the gym.

The phrase 'go to the gym like this' is incorrect; it should be 'going to the gym' to maintain parallel structure with other gerunds in the list.

× If I can sing for sure, I will sing for my girlfriend, umm, to know how much I love her.

✓ If I can sing, for sure, I will sing for my girlfriend to show how much I love her.

The phrase 'to know how much I love her' is incorrect; it should be 'to show how much I love her' to express the intended meaning. Also, the comma placement is adjusted for clarity.