Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more direct and confident answer first, then briefly explain your feelings. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your sentences are complete and clear.

例: I don't particularly enjoy singing because it's not my strength, but I like spending time with friends at karaoke because it's fun and social.

提案: Provide a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I haven't formally learnt how to sing, but when I was younger, my friends and I used a karaoke app to sing along and upload our recordings, which helped me practice informally.

提案: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to organise your ideas and provide specific reasons for your choice.

例: If I had to sing for someone, I would choose my cat because he is adorable and has given me many memorable moments. Singing to him would be a nice way to encourage his company.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples or reasons.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it creates a positive atmosphere. For example, happy songs can help people feel closer and enjoy their time together.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learnt' is a past tense and past participle form used mainly in British English, but 'learned' is more common in American English. Since the question uses present perfect tense ('Have you ever...'), the past participle form 'learned' is appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now.

× so me and my friends usually sing along with them sentence and upload it to the app.

✓ so my friends and I usually sing along with the sentences and upload them to the app.

The pronoun 'me' should be 'I' when used as the subject of a verb. Also, 'sentence' should be plural 'sentences' to match 'them' and the plural action. 'Them' refers to 'sentences', so 'upload it' should be 'upload them' to agree in number.

× if I want to sing for I probably want to sing for my cat because it's a very adorable and it's he gives me a lot of memorable moment.

✓ if I want to sing for someone, I probably want to sing for my cat because he is very adorable and he gives me a lot of memorable moments.

The phrase 'if I want to sing for' is incomplete and needs an object like 'someone'. 'It's a very adorable' is incorrect because 'it' refers to an object, but the cat is a male, so 'he is very adorable' is correct. Also, 'memorable moment' should be plural 'memorable moments' to indicate multiple instances.

× I think sing a song for him can be a really good way to encouraging him to as my company.

✓ I think singing a song for him can be a really good way to encourage him to keep me company.

The verb 'sing' should be in gerund form 'singing' to act as the subject. 'To encouraging' is incorrect; it should be the base form 'to encourage' after 'way to'. The phrase 'to as my company' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'to keep me company'.

× Yes, definitely liked singing can brings a different vibe of atmosphere to the environment you are in.

✓ Yes, definitely liked singing can bring a different vibe or atmosphere to the environment you are in.

The verb 'brings' should be 'bring' because the subject 'singing' is singular gerund and modal verb 'can' is followed by base verb form. Also, 'liked singing' is awkward; it should be 'I like singing' or 'liked singing' removed. Here, 'liked' seems misplaced and should be omitted.

× So really depends on what kind of sounds that are using.

✓ So it really depends on what kind of sounds are being used.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'it' is needed. 'Sounds that are using' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'sounds are being used'.

× If it's like happy some it really helped people to get closer together.

✓ If it's like happy songs, it really helps people to get closer together.

'Happy some' is incorrect; it should be 'happy songs'. 'Helped' is past tense but the sentence is conditional present, so 'helps' is correct.