Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在用词错误（如“seeing my favorite songs”应为“singing my favorite songs”），且部分内容重复，建议注意词汇准确性并避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood. Moreover, it is a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的用词错误（如“seeing”应为“singing”），且句子结构不够清晰，建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑性。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I just enjoy singing casually at home or with friends during social gatherings. For me, singing is more of a hobby than a skill I have developed professionally.

提案: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但可以增加更多具体细节，使内容更丰富。建议在回答中加入具体场合或情感描述。

例: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and always appreciate my efforts. For example, during family gatherings, singing together creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

提案: 回答中再次出现“seeing their favorite songs”的错误，应为“singing”。此外，内容较为简单，建议增加具体例子或个人体验以丰富答案。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It helps them relax and relieve stress. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs with friends, it always lifts our spirits and makes us feel joyful.

× When I feel stressed, seeing my favorite songs can instantly lift my mood.

✓ When I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs can instantly lift my mood.

这里'seeing'用法不当，应该用动名词'singing'表示唱歌的动作，'seeing'是看见，不符合语境。

× I think it can help me relax and express my emotions, and seeing is rather a hobby for me instead of a skill that is formally developed.

✓ I think it can help me relax and express my emotions, and singing is rather a hobby for me instead of a skill that is formally developed.

这里'seeing'用法错误，应为'singing'，表示唱歌作为爱好。

× I think many people feel uplifted and joyful when seeing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.

✓ I think many people feel uplifted and joyful when singing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.

这里'seeing'用法错误，应为'singing'，表示唱歌的动作。