Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在多处拼写错误（如'sitting'应为'singing'），语法混乱，表达不够自然且有重复。建议注意单词拼写，简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的时态。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. For example, I often sing while studying to reduce pressure.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（'found'应为'fond'，'seeing'应为'singing'），句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because I'm not very fond of it. However, I enjoy singing with my friends occasionally, even without formal training.

提案: 回答中多处拼写和语法错误（如'thought'应为'think'，'sin'应为'sing'，'thing'应为'singing'，'was seen'应为'sang'），表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用正确时态和词汇，简洁表达。

例: I don't usually sing for a specific person because I don't think my singing is very good. But I have sung birthday songs for friends on their special days.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（'Sun'应为'Song'，'motivative'应为'motivational'），句子结构稍显混乱。建议注意拼写，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更流畅。

例: Of course, songs with motivational lyrics and fascinating background music can bring happiness to people. They encourage people to enjoy and participate in events like music festivals.

× I like sitting even though I don't really understand the technical point in seeing and I don't sing very well.

✓ I like singing even though I don't really understand the technical point in singing and I don't sing very well.

动词后面接动名词时，应该使用动词的-ing形式。这里'sitting'应改为'singing'，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。

× But seeing can reduce my stress when I feel a lot of pressure, such as I will sing when I was studying.

✓ But singing can reduce my stress when I feel a lot of pressure, such as I sang when I was studying.

同样，'seeing'应为'singing'。此外，'I will sing when I was studying'时态不一致，应改为过去时'I sang when I was studying'。

× such as I will sing when I was studying.

✓ such as I sang when I was studying.

这里描述过去的动作，应该使用过去时态，'will sing'应改为'sang'。

× No, I haven't because I'm not really found in that field, but I still think seeing is a very unique technique for human and if I had the chance I would like to spend some time singing with my friends, but I don't think I really need a particular schedule for me.

✓ No, I haven't because I'm not really fond of that field, but I still think singing is a very unique technique for humans and if I had the chance I would like to spend some time singing with my friends, but I don't think I really need a particular schedule for myself.

'found'应为'fond of'，表示喜欢。'seeing'应为'singing'。'human'应为复数'humans'。'for me'改为'reflecting自己'的'for myself'更合适。

× No, I haven't because I'm not really found in that field, but I still think seeing is a very unique technique for human and if I had the chance I would like to spend some time singing with my friends, but I don't think I really need a particular schedule for me.

✓ No, I haven't because I'm not really fond of that field, but I still think singing is a very unique technique for humans and if I had the chance I would like to spend some time singing with my friends, but I don't think I really need a particular schedule for myself.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。

× I can't really thought a person who I can particularly sin for because there's no reason for that and I don't think my thing can really comfort that people.

✓ I can't really think of a person who I can particularly sing for because there's no reason for that and I don't think my singing can really comfort those people.

'thought'应为'think'，时态错误。'sin'应为'sing'。'that people'应为'those people'，指代复数。

× I was seen that birthday song for him.

✓ I sang that birthday song for him.

'was seen'是被动语态，且不符合语境，应改为主动过去式'sang'。

× Of course, Sun can fill with some motivative lyrics and the background music can be very fascinating, which makes people enjoy and participate in events such as music festivals.

✓ Of course, songs can be filled with some motivational lyrics and the background music can be very fascinating, which makes people enjoy and participate in events such as music festivals.

'Sun'应为'song'或'songs'。'fill'应为被动语态'be filled'。'motivative'拼写错误，应为'motivational'。