Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够自然，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且明确表达情感。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me express my emotions.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达自己的经历和愿望，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't had the chance to learn singing techniques yet, but I am very keen to improve because I think my singing could be better.

提案: 回答较简短且口语化，建议使用更正式的表达，并适当扩展内容，使回答更完整。

例: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment without worrying about others' opinions.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达自己的观点。

例: Yes, I get happiness from listening to my favorite singers, but I don't think my own singing brings happiness to others yet.

× I do like singing because singing just made me feel happy and my emotion can be sad by seeing.

✓ I do like singing because singing just makes me feel happy and my emotions can be sad when I see certain things.

The verb 'made' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'makes' to match 'I do like singing'. Also, 'my emotion can be sad by seeing' is awkward; it should be 'my emotions can be sad when I see certain things' to express the idea clearly and correctly.

× No, I have have not got a chance to learn about anything techniques.

✓ No, I have not had a chance to learn any techniques.

The phrase 'have have' is a repetition error. Also, 'got' is informal and incorrect here; 'have had' is the correct present perfect form. 'Anything techniques' is incorrect; it should be 'any techniques'.

× However, I would very keen to have a chance to learn about more singing techniques because I thought my singing is not very good.

✓ However, I would be very keen to have a chance to learn more singing techniques because I think my singing is not very good.

The modal verb 'would' requires 'be' to form 'would be'. 'Thought' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'think'. 'Learn about more singing techniques' should be 'learn more singing techniques' for natural phrasing.

× Perhaps myself. I don't wanna sing to anybody else.

✓ Perhaps for myself. I don't want to sing for anybody else.

'Myself' alone is incorrect as a subject or object here; 'for myself' clarifies the meaning. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate. Also, 'sing to' should be 'sing for' when referring to an audience.

× Yes, I will go happiness from my favorite singers and my my singing didn't bring any happiness to others.

✓ Yes, I get happiness from my favorite singers, but my singing doesn't bring any happiness to others.

'Will go happiness' is incorrect; 'get happiness' or 'receive happiness' is correct. 'My my' is a repetition error. 'Didn't bring' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'doesn't bring'.