Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式（如"like sing"应为"like singing"），避免使用不清晰的词汇（如"Ki know"），并且回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I like singing because it is a fun way to relax and connect with my friends. Although I'm not a professional, I enjoy singing at clubs where we share our love for music.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但存在语法错误，如"haven't take"应为"haven't taken"。建议使用正确的时态和更丰富的表达来增强回答的自然性和完整性。

例: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons. However, I often listen to music and sing along to improve my skills.

提案: 回答表达了想为父亲唱歌的情感，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如"always comes about me"不清楚。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Actually, I want to sing for my father because he is loving and hardworking. I want to thank him by singing a song that shows my appreciation.

提案: 回答中存在多处拼写和语法错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，"study of the scene"表达不清。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的词汇，并且句子结构要清晰，表达更具体。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I was in high school, singing helped me feel more confident and joyful, and I enjoy sharing that happiness with others.

× I like sing you know, I'm not a professional singer but for me it's more about having fun and realistic.

✓ I like singing you know, I'm not a professional singer but for me it's more about having fun and being realistic.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，故将sing改为singing。同时，句中realistic应改为being realistic以保持语法正确。

× Ki know.

✓ You know.

这里的Ki应为You，可能是拼写错误，You know是常用表达。

× Its a fun way to connect to people who share interesting things.

✓ It's a fun way to connect with people who share interesting things.

Its应为It's（It is的缩写）。动词connect后应接介词with而非to。

× I haven't take the same formal lessons.

✓ I haven't taken the same formal lessons.

现在完成时中，助动词have后应接动词的过去分词形式，take的过去分词是taken。

× my father is lovely and hard working always comes about me.

✓ my father is lovely and hardworking and always cares about me.

hard working应写为hardworking作为形容词。comes about me表达不正确，应为cares about me，表示关心我。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to the people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to the people.

这里应为singing（唱歌），seeing（看见）与语境不符。

× I was really a study of the scene.

✓ I was really a student of the scene.

study是动词，句中应使用名词student表示学生。

× The scene can bring the active emotion to the people, like happiness, and you can be the confidence.

✓ Singing can bring active emotions to people, like happiness, and you can be confident.

scene应为singing，the active emotion应为active emotions，you can be the confidence表达不正确，应为you can be confident。