Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更准确，避免重复和语法错误，如“more happier”应为“happier”。同时，回答应更简洁，避免句子未完成。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and feel happier. For example, I often sing in the bathroom every night, which is a relaxing way to end my day.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，如“although”连接两部分内容。

例: No, I have never learned to sing formally, although I took some music lessons in primary school. Since then, I usually sing alone just for fun.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“support”应为“support”。句子未完成，表达不完整。建议注意语法和句子完整性。

例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me unconditionally. Singing is a good way to express my gratitude and strengthen our family bond.

提案: 回答未完成，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议补充完整句子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. For example, during birthdays or weddings, people often sing together to celebrate and share joy.

× Yes, I'm fond of singing because it's a great way to reduce my stress and help me feel more happier for example, I always like singing in my bathroom every night.

✓ Yes, I'm fond of singing because it's a great way to reduce my stress and help me feel happier. For example, I always like singing in my bathroom every night.

“more happier”是错误的比较级用法，happier已经是比较级，不能再加more。应直接用happier。

× It's the best way to relieve stress and.

✓ It's the best way to relieve stress.

句子以“and”结尾，结构不完整，缺少后续内容。应去掉“and”使句子完整。

× No, I've never learned how to sing formally, but I did take some music lessons when I was in primary school.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing formally, but I took some music lessons when I was in primary school.

“did take”在此处不符合一般过去时的正常表达，直接用过去式“took”即可。

× After that I usually sing but on my own or just for fun.

✓ After that, I usually sing on my own or just for fun.

“but”在此处用法不当，句意是“我通常自己唱或只是为了娱乐”，应去掉“but”使句子通顺。

× The person I want to thank for is my family because they are always support me unconditionally.

✓ The person I want to thank is my family because they always support me unconditionally.

“thank for”搭配错误，应为“thank”；“they are always support”主谓不一致，应为“they always support”。

× I want to express my gratitude and my love for them and it's also a great way to boost family bonding and.

✓ I want to express my gratitude and my love for them, and it's also a great way to boost family bonding.

句子以“and”结尾，结构不完整，缺少后续内容。应去掉“and”使句子完整。

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it's a great way to express our emotion especially during important occasions like birthdays or weddings, people usually sing together to show their.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it's a great way to express our emotions. Especially during important occasions like birthdays or weddings, people usually sing together to show their feelings.

句子结构不完整，缺少句尾内容，且“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，句子应拆分为两句使表达完整。