Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because I really love music, although I don't think my singing voice is very good.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句式，并且避免重复和不必要的疑问句。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just sing for fun and not professionally.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的代词和更流畅的表达方式。

例: I would like to sing for my friends, especially on their birthdays, by singing the Happy Birthday song.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的句子结构，并注意词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, of course. I like K-pop and listen to it every day. When I feel sad or bored, listening to K-pop songs makes me feel happy.

× Yes, I like singing because I very like music, but I think my vocal is not very well.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I like music very much, but I think my vocals are not very good.

这里的 'music' 是不可数名词，不能用 'very like'，应改为 'like music very much'。'vocal' 应为复数形式 'vocals'，表示歌唱能力。'not very well' 是副词短语，形容词位置应使用 'not very good'。

× No, I never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

表示过去经历时，应该用现在完成时 'have never learned'，'learn' 应该用过去分词形式 'learned'。

× Singing is just my habit. Is singing for fun and not very professional?

✓ Singing is just my habit. It is for fun and not very professional.

第二句缺少主语，应加上 'It'，使句子完整。

× Maybe my friend, uh, when my friend's birthday, I want to sing happy birthday song to him or she.

✓ Maybe my friend. Uh, when it's my friend's birthday, I want to sing the happy birthday song to him or her.

'him or she' 中 'she' 应改为宾格 'her'。'when my friend's birthday' 应改为完整句 'when it's my friend's birthday'。'happy birthday song' 前应加定冠词 'the'。

× I listen K pop music for everyday.

✓ I listen to K pop music every day.

动词 'listen' 后应加介词 'to'。'everyday' 是形容词，表示日常的，应改为副词短语 'every day'。

× When I sad or I feel boring, I often listen K pop songs that let me very happy and happiness.

✓ When I am sad or feel bored, I often listen to K pop songs that make me very happy.

'sad' 前缺少动词 'am'。'feel boring' 应改为 'feel bored'，因为人感到无聊用 'bored'。'listen' 后应加介词 'to'。'let me very happy and happiness' 结构不正确，应改为 'make me very happy'。