Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中多次将"singing"误说成"seeing"，影响了表达的准确性。建议加强发音练习，确保关键词发音正确。此外，回答内容较为重复，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I really love singing because it helps me reduce stress and relax after a long day at work. Moreover, I enjoy singing with my friends when we feel stressed or upset, as it lifts our spirits.

提案: 回答中多次错误使用"see"代替"sing"，且句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，注意主谓一致和时态。回答应简洁明了，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I have been learning to sing for about three years. I started in junior high school because my mom noticed my interest and encouraged me to take singing classes to improve my skills.

提案: 回答中"upside down"用词不当，应使用"feeling down"或"upset"。建议学习常用表达，避免直译。句子结构需更清晰，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually sing for myself, but I would love to sing for people who are feeling down or stressed because I believe singing can help them develop a positive attitude and feel motivated.

提案: 回答内容混乱，词汇使用错误严重，如"print"和"calendar"用词不当。建议加强词汇积累和句子结构练习，确保表达清晰且符合语境。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For singers, singing allows them to express their emotions, and for listeners, it can help relieve stress and promote relaxation.

× Yes I really love seeing and I think seeing is one of my best way to reduce my stress and have a relaxation after a long time work.

✓ Yes, I really love singing and I think singing is one of my best ways to reduce my stress and relax after a long time of work.

动词后面用动名词形式表示喜欢的动作，原句中'seeing'应为'singing'。'way'应为复数形式'ways'，因为是多种方式之一。'have a relaxation'表达不自然，改为'relax'更合适。

× Yes I really love seeing and I think seeing is one of my best way to reduce my stress and have a relaxation after a long time work.

✓ Yes, I really love singing and I think singing is one of my best ways to reduce my stress and relax after a long time of work.

'way'应使用复数形式'ways'，因为表示多种方式之一。

× Yes I really love seeing and I think seeing is one of my best way to reduce my stress and have a relaxation after a long time work.

✓ Yes, I really love singing and I think singing is one of my best ways to reduce my stress and relax after a long time of work.

'after a long time work'缺少介词，正确表达应为'after a long time of work'。

× Also I think seeing to others my and my friends who are very stressful and upset down.

✓ Also, I think singing to others, my friends and I, who are very stressed and upset.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'stressful'形容人时意思是'使人有压力的'，应改为' stressed'表示'感到压力的'。'upset down'表达错误，应为'upset'。

× Yeah, I have known how to see about three years.

✓ Yeah, I have known how to sing for about three years.

'see'应为'sing'。'have known'用于表示持续状态，后面应加'for'表示时间段。

× Yeah, I have known how to see about three years.

✓ Yeah, I have known how to sing for about three years.

动词不定式后面应使用动词原形，'see'应改为'sing'。

× It was in my junior high school and my mom found me.

✓ It was in my junior high school when my mom found me.

句子缺少连接词，'when'用于连接时间状语从句。

× I was really interest.

✓ I was really interested.

'interest'是名词或动词，形容词应为' interested'，表示感兴趣的状态。

× I was very interested in seeing, so he decided me to have this kind of classes to improve my skills.

✓ I was very interested in singing, so he decided for me to take this kind of class to improve my skills.

'he decided me'表达错误，应为'he decided for me'或'he decided that I should'。'classes'单数更合适，且'kind of class'更自然。

× I was very interested in seeing, so he decided me to have this kind of classes to improve my skills.

✓ I was very interested in singing, so he decided for me to take this kind of class to improve my skills.

'seeing'应为'singing'。

× OK, I always think for myself but actually I really want to sing for someone who is really upside down and or very stressful because I think seeing can give them the positive attitude towards life and make them get motivated.

✓ OK, I always think for myself but actually I really want to sing for someone who is really down and/or very stressed because I think singing can give them a positive attitude towards life and motivate them.

'upside down'用法错误，应为'down'表示情绪低落。'stressful'应为'stressed'表示感到压力。'seeing'应为'singing'。'make them get motivated'表达不自然，改为'motivate them'。

× OK, I always think for myself but actually I really want to sing for someone who is really upside down and or very stressful because I think seeing can give them the positive attitude towards life and make them get motivated.

✓ OK, I always think for myself but actually I really want to sing for someone who is really down and/or very stressed because I think singing can give them a positive attitude towards life and motivate them.

'seeing'应为'singing'。

× OK, I think I absolutely have these two people for on the one hand.

✓ OK, I think I absolutely have these two types of people in mind on the one hand.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，'have these two people for'不正确，应补充完整表达。

× As for the singer, seeing some singing by themselves can print them.

✓ As for the singer, singing by themselves can inspire them.

'seeing some singing'表达错误，应为'singing'. 'print them'用词错误，应为'inspire them'。

× A calendar is a good way to release the stress and have a relaxation.

✓ Singing is a good way to relieve stress and relax.

'calendar'错误，应为'singing'。'release the stress'表达不自然，改为'relieve stress'。'have a relaxation'改为'relax'更自然。