Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够清晰，表达有些混乱，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. When I listen to my favorite songs, I often sing along to relieve stress.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清楚表达自己没有学过唱歌但有兴趣学习。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing properly. My singing skills are poor, and sometimes my friends cannot recognize the songs I sing. I would like to learn if I have more free time.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清楚，建议先明确回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I want to sing for my parents and friends to thank them. They always support me and enjoy my singing.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（seeing应为 singing），句子结构不够清晰，建议使用正确词汇并举具体例子说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, in musicals and operas, songs express the characters' emotions and make the audience feel joyful.

× Yes, of course, when I see my favorite music, I will sing it, follow the music because I think music is a good way to relax.

✓ Yes, of course, when I see my favorite music, I will sing it, following the music because I think music is a good way to relax.

这里需要使用动词的现在分词形式"following"来表示伴随动作，表示“跟随音乐”。原句中"follow"是动词原形，语法不正确。

× You know, many people under the pressure and thing can make that release suggest.

✓ You know, many people under pressure and stress can release it.

原句结构混乱，"under the pressure and thing"表达不清，且"can make that release suggest"语法错误。应简化为"under pressure and stress"，并用"can release it"表达释放压力的意思。

× No, so my thing skill is very poor and sometimes when I sing songs, my friend cannot recognize the songs.

✓ No, so my singing skill is very poor and sometimes when I sing songs, my friends cannot recognize the songs.

"thing skill"应为"singing skill"，且"friend"应为复数"friends"，因为通常指多个朋友。这里涉及单复数问题。

× No, so my thing skill is very poor and sometimes when I sing songs, my friend cannot recognize the songs.

✓ No, so my singing skill is very poor and sometimes when I sing songs, my friends cannot recognize the songs.

"friend"应使用复数形式"friends"，因为通常指多个朋友。

× If I have more spare time, I think I will learn it.

✓ If I have more spare time, I think I will learn to sing.

"learn it"表达不完整，应该明确学习的内容，改为"learn to sing"更准确。

× Umm, I want to thank for my parents and my friends because they always give me useful advice and unpleasant encouragement.

✓ Umm, I want to thank my parents and my friends because they always give me useful advice and unpleasant encouragement.

动词"thank"后不需要介词"for"，直接加宾语即可。

× Umm, I want to thank for my parents and my friends because they always give me useful advice and unpleasant encouragement.

✓ Umm, I want to thank my parents and my friends because they always give me useful advice and pleasant encouragement.

"unpleasant encouragement"意思矛盾，"encouragement"应为积极含义，使用"pleasant encouragement"更合适。

× They not only just to listen me but also umm, they will, but also they will enjoy me and we are.

✓ They not only listen to me but also enjoy my company, and we are close.

原句结构混乱，"not only just to listen me"语法错误，应为"not only listen to me"，且"enjoy me and we are"不完整，改为"enjoy my company, and we are close"更通顺。

× Of course, I think seeing can bring many kinds of feelings to people.

✓ Of course, I think singing can bring many kinds of feelings to people.

"seeing"应为"singing"，原句中拼写错误导致词义错误。

× For example, in many music movies and music operates, there are too many songs, different songs to express characters feelings.

✓ For example, in many music movies and music operas, there are many songs, different songs to express characters' feelings.

"music operates"应为"music operas"，且"characters feelings"应加所有格，改为"characters' feelings"。