Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence in my singing skills and feel embarrassed singing in front of others. However, I enjoy listening to music as it helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达意思，同时避免重复。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am not confident in my singing ability and feel embarrassed singing in front of others. I prefer to listen to music instead.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并使句子更流畅。

例: The first person who comes to my mind is my friend Sarah. She is always encouraging and warm-hearted. If I sing in front of her, I would feel more confident.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，且最后一句表达不明确。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。

例: Definitely, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax after a busy day. However, singing is not something I enjoy myself.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing ability and for me it's very embarrassed singing in front of others.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing ability and for me it's very embarrassing to sing in front of others.

这里“embarrassed”是形容词，表示“感到尴尬的人”，而句中需要用形容词“embarrassing”表示“令人尴尬的”，因为是描述“singing in front of others”这个动作让人尴尬。

× Prefer to sing.

✓ I prefer to sing.

句子缺少主语，完整句子应包含主语“I”，否则句子结构不完整。

× I like listening to music, it relax me a lot after a busy day.

✓ I like listening to music; it relaxes me a lot after a busy day.

“relax”作为动词，主语是第三人称单数“it”，动词应加-s变为“relaxes”。另外，两个独立分句应使用分号或句号分开。

× I have not taken anything lessons because I'm not confident in my singing ability and if I sing in front of others it's very embarrassed.

✓ I have not taken any lessons because I'm not confident in my singing ability and if I sing in front of others it's very embarrassing.

“anything lessons”搭配错误，应使用“any lessons”。同时，“embarrassed”应改为“embarrassing”，同上。

× Prefer to see, I like to listen.

✓ I prefer to see, but I like to listen.

句子缺少主语且连接不当，应补充主语“I”并用连词“but”连接两个并列句。

× She is always encourage me and warm hearted.

✓ She always encourages me and is warm-hearted.

“encourage”应为第三人称单数形式“encourages”，且“warm hearted”作为形容词应加连字符“warm-hearted”，并且缺少系动词“is”。

× If I see in front of her, it must be confident for me.

✓ If I sing in front of her, I must be confident.

“see”用错，应为“sing”；“confident”是形容词，不能单独作谓语，需加主语“I”并调整句子结构。

× Definitely, I think so because some people who likes singing, it's a good way for them to relax themselves after a busy day.

✓ Definitely, I think so because some people who like singing, it's a good way for them to relax themselves after a busy day.

“people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“like”而非“likes”。

× However, it's not good thing for me to see.

✓ However, it's not a good thing for me to do.

缺少冠词“a”，且“to see”用词不当，应改为“to do”或更合适的表达。