Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“don't like sing”应为“don't like singing”，以及“always listening music to instead singing”表达不自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: Actually, I don't like singing because I feel shy and lack confidence when I sing in front of others. So, I usually listen to music instead of singing myself.

提案: 回答中“key off”用词不当，应使用“off-key”或“out of tune”。建议使用正确的表达方式，并且可以增加一些细节说明学习唱歌的经历。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child, but I think I am not very talented because I often sing off-key in front of others.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构有些不连贯，如“Sing with them, help me relax and strengthens our friendship”应调整为完整句子。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my friends because we often go to karaoke bars at night to have fun together. Singing with them helps me relax and strengthens our friendship, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

提案: 回答中出现拼写错误“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达不完整，最后一句“I think it can bring”缺少宾语。建议注意拼写和句子完整性，表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I think singing is a good way to bring happiness to people. For example, people often sing in the shower or while driving to express their emotions and feel happier.

× Actually I don't like sing because I have no confidence in my singing ability while I was sitting in front of others.

✓ Actually I don't like singing because I have no confidence in my singing ability while I was sitting in front of others.

动词like后面接动名词形式singing，而不是动词原形sing。动词+ing形式表示喜欢做某事。

× I will feel shy so that I always listening music to instead singing.

✓ I will feel shy so I always listen to music instead of singing.

动词always后应使用一般现在时listen，且动词listen后需加介词to。'instead of'是固定搭配，后面接动名词singing。

× Yes, I learned how to sing in my childhood, but I think I have no talent for singing because I always key off when I sing in front of others.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my childhood, but I think I have no talent for singing because I always go off key when I sing in front of others.

短语'go off key'表示走音，原句用错了'key off'，应改为'go off key'。

× Sing with them, help me relax and strengthens our friendship which makes the experience very enjoyable.

✓ Singing with them helps me relax and strengthens our friendship, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

句子缺少主语，动词形式不一致。'Singing'作为主语，动词用第三人称单数形式helps和strengthens。

× Yes, I think seeing is a good way to bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing is a good way to bring happiness to people.

单词'seeing'应为'singing'，原句为拼写错误。

× For example, when people are taking showers or driving in the cars, they always seem to express their emotions.

✓ For example, when people are taking showers or driving cars, they always seem to express their emotions.

短语'driving cars'中不需要冠词'the'，因为cars是泛指。

× I think it can bring.

✓ I think it can bring happiness.

句子不完整，缺少宾语'happiness'，导致表达不清。