Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式和介词使用不当，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词不定式和动名词的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

例: I don't like singing because I lack confidence in my singing ability. I feel shy when singing in front of others, so I prefer listening to music instead.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“have no talent on music”应为“have no talent for music”。建议使用更准确的介词和表达方式，并丰富细节。

例: When I was a child, my mom taught me how to sing, but I don't have much talent for music. I often feel terrible when I sing.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I would like to sing for my family because they always support and help me. Singing for them is a way to express my emotions and love.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（如“unseen”应为“singing”），句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词，并简洁表达观点。

例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relax. That's why many people enjoy going to concerts or live music venues.

× Well actually I don't like sing because I have no confidence to my singing ability.

✓ Well actually I don't like singing because I have no confidence in my singing ability.

动词后面需要用动名词形式，'like'后面应接动名词'singing'。此外，'confidence to'应改为'confidence in'，表示对某事有信心。

× Well actually I don't like sing because I have no confidence to my singing ability.

✓ Well actually I don't like singing because I have no confidence in my singing ability.

'confidence'后面应接介词'in'，表示对某事有信心，不能用'to'。

× so I prefer to listening music.

✓ so I prefer listening to music.

'prefer'后面接动名词形式，且'listening'后应加介词'to'，构成'listening to music'。

× Well, in my childhood, my mom would tell me how to sing, but I have no talent on music and singing.

✓ Well, in my childhood, my mom would tell me how to sing, but I had no talent in music and singing.

描述过去的情况时，谓语动词应使用过去时态，'have'应改为'had'。此外，'talent on'应改为'talent in'。

× Well, in my childhood, my mom would tell me how to sing, but I have no talent on music and singing.

✓ Well, in my childhood, my mom would tell me how to sing, but I had no talent in music and singing.

'talent'后面应接介词'in'，表示在某方面有天赋，不能用'on'。

× I feel very terrible when I sing.

✓ I feel very terrible when I sing.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× That must be my family because seeing to because family always supports and helps me in my life, I think can express my emotions and love for them.

✓ That must be my family because family always supports and helps me in my life. I think I can express my emotions and love for them.

句子结构混乱，'seeing to because'无意义，应拆分为两个句子，并补充主语'I'。

× That must be my family because seeing to because family always supports and helps me in my life, I think can express my emotions and love for them.

✓ That must be my family because family always supports and helps me in my life. I think I can express my emotions and love for them.

缺少主语'I'，导致句子不完整，应补充。

× Absolutely unseen can bring happiness, happiness and people can express their emotions and relax.

✓ Absolutely, singing can bring happiness, and people can express their emotions and relax.

'unseen'应为'singing'，且句子缺少连词，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× That is why so many people like go to the concerts or live house.

✓ That is why so many people like to go to concerts or live houses.

'like'后面应接不定式'to go'，'concerts'和'live houses'应使用复数形式。