Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing at all.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Yes, I have. I have learned at school.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
To be honest, I want to sing for my parents because my parents is really good for me, so I want to write for them.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Actually yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people. If someone are good at seeing, seeing may give people confidence to do everything and it may give people relaxing times.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较为直接，但表达重复且语言不够自然。建议避免重复使用“singing”，可以用代词替代，并丰富表达。
例: No, I don't enjoy it because I'm not confident in my vocal skills.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议增加学习的时间、方式或感受，使回答更具体。
例: Yes, I learned singing during music classes at school when I was a child.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 60.0提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的词汇，并明确表达想为父母唱歌的原因。
例: Honestly, I would like to sing for my parents because they have always supported me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 55.0提案: 存在拼写错误和语法错误，表达不流畅。建议注意单复数和拼写，使用连词使句子更连贯。
例: Actually, yes. I believe singing can bring happiness because it boosts confidence and helps people relax.
文法
× my parents is really good for me
✓ my parents are really good to me
这里的主语是复数形式“parents”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。此外，习惯用法是“good to someone”表示对某人好。
× If someone are good at seeing
✓ If someone is good at singing
“someone”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是复数“are”。另外，原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。
× my parents is really good for me
✓ my parents are really good to me
“good”后面应接介词“to”表示对某人好，而不是“for”。
× seeing may give people relaxing times
✓ singing may give people relaxing times
这里应使用“singing”而非“seeing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌带来的快乐。
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