Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it gives me positive energy when I feel down. I often sing with my friends during karaoke sessions, and I love entertaining them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，并且使句子更简洁明了。

例: I didn't have the chance to take singing courses as a child, so I taught myself by listening to my favorite songs. This helped me improve my skills a lot.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，句子结构混乱，部分表达不完整。建议明确回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节。

例: I like to sing and play the piano for my close friends during gatherings. It makes the atmosphere joyful, and I also enjoy performing for my family occasionally.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，表达不够自然。建议使用更贴切的词汇，并简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness. Upbeat songs can make people feel energetic and curious, while soothing songs can help heal emotional pain.

× Well, I extremely keen on singing because it gave me a positive energy when I feel down and I always sing with my friend when we go to the karaoke sessions and I really enjoy on entertaining my friends.

✓ Well, I am extremely keen on singing because it gives me positive energy when I feel down, and I always sing with my friends when we go to karaoke sessions, and I really enjoy entertaining my friends.

句子中缺少动词“am”，导致语法错误；“gave”应改为现在时“gives”，因为描述的是习惯性动作；“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为是泛指多个朋友；“enjoy on entertaining”中“on”多余，应去掉。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，以及介词的正确使用。

× To sing Well, I had no chance to take sing courses when I was a kid, so I tried to taught myself how to sing.

✓ To sing well, I had no chance to take singing courses when I was a kid, so I tried to teach myself how to sing.

“tried to taught”中“taught”是过去式，应该用动词原形“teach”跟在“tried to”后面；“sing courses”应为“singing courses”，动名词形式作名词使用。建议注意动词不定式后动词形式的正确使用和动名词的用法。

× This could really let me gained a lot.

✓ This could really let me gain a lot.

“let”后面应接动词原形，“gained”是过去式，错误使用。建议注意使役动词后动词形式的正确使用。

× Sometimes when I'm at a get together with my close friend, I will perform on piano and sing for them.

✓ Sometimes when I'm at a get-together with my close friends, I will perform on the piano and sing for them.

“get together”应连写为“get-together”表示聚会；“close friend”应为复数“close friends”；“perform on piano”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指乐器。建议注意名词复数形式和冠词的使用。

× I enjoy entertaining with my friend and creating a joyful atmosphere and seeing things goes for my family.

✓ I enjoy entertaining my friends, creating a joyful atmosphere, and seeing things go well for my family.

“entertaining with my friend”中“with”多余，应直接宾语；“friend”应为复数“friends”；“seeing things goes”中“goes”应为原形“go”，因为前面是动名词短语。建议注意介词的正确使用和动词形式的一致性。

× Occasionally I will play.

✓ Occasionally, I will play as well.

句子不完整，缺少宾语或补充信息，导致表达不清。建议补充完整句子，使表达更完整。

× Thing can definitely bring happiness to people when someone hears high pitched songs which could let them feel energetic and give them a sense of curiosity.

✓ Things can definitely bring happiness to people when someone hears high-pitched songs which can make them feel energetic and give them a sense of curiosity.

“Thing”应为复数“Things”，因为后文指多种事物；“high pitched”应加连字符“high-pitched”；“could let”改为“can make”更自然。建议注意名词复数和形容词连字符的使用。

× However, when someone feels down, these songs can heal the wound as well.

✓ However, when someone feels down, these songs can heal wounds as well.

“the wound”使用了定冠词，显得不自然，应该用复数“wounds”表示一般意义上的伤痛。建议注意冠词和名词单复数的搭配。