Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有多处词汇和语法错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“say well”应为“sing well”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和基本语法，回答时尽量简洁明了，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, I often sing while taking a shower, which makes the experience more enjoyable. I also enjoy listening to R&B and country music because they have unique styles.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在词汇错误，如“seeing casualties”应为“singing casually”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并避免表达含糊不清。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. I think if I take it too seriously, it might become stressful. So, I prefer to enjoy singing casually in my free time.

提案: 回答内容较好，表达了具体的人和原因，但句子稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

例: I would like to sing for my grandmother. When she was young, she often went to theaters and music concerts to enjoy her weekends. Singing for her now would help bring back those happy memories and make her weekends more special.

提案: 回答简短且存在词汇错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且“depressions”应为“depression”。建议扩展回答内容，使用准确词汇，并提供具体例子。

例: Yes, definitely. Many studies show that singing can help patients with depression improve their mood and overall well-being.

× I really enjoy seeing my free time because it helps me relax and feel happy.

✓ I really enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and feel happy.

动词enjoy后面应接动名词形式，原句中seeing应改为singing。

× For example, I often say well taking a shower which makes the experience more enjoyable.

✓ For example, I often sing while taking a shower which makes the experience more enjoyable.

原句中say用法不当，应改为sing，且表达“洗澡时唱歌”应使用while引导的时间状语从句。

× Besides seeing, I also like listen to R&B and country music because it have unique.

✓ Besides singing, I also like to listen to R&B and country music because they are unique.

原句中seeing应为singing，like后应加to，it指代复数音乐应改为they，动词have应改为are。

× Honestly, no, I have never learned how to sing.

✓ Honestly, no, I have never learnt how to sing.

learn的过去分词在英式英语中常用learnt，保持时态一致。

× Maybe in the future I might only enjoy seeing casualties.

✓ Maybe in the future I might only enjoy singing casually.

seeing casualties无意义，应为singing casually，动词后接动名词。

× A lot of researches show that seeing for patients with depressions can improve their condition.

✓ A lot of research shows that singing for patients with depression can improve their condition.

research是不可数名词，改为单数形式，see应为sing，depressions应为单数depression。