Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な理由を明確に述べ、文法と語彙を正しく使う練習をしましょう。例えば、「I like singing because it relaxes me and I often sing when I have free time, like in the bathroom or on my way to school.」のように答えると良いです。

例: I like singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing in the bathroom or when I am going to school.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが目立ちます。質問に直接答え、将来の意図を明確に述べることが大切です。例えば、「I have never taken singing lessons, but I want to learn in the future to improve my skills for karaoke.」のように答えましょう。

例: I have never taken singing lessons, but I want to learn in the future to improve my skills for karaoke.

提案: 理由は伝わりますが、文法の誤りと繰り返しが見られます。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、「I want to sing for my brother because he always listens to me and makes me feel good.」のように答えると良いです。

例: I want to sing for my brother because he always listens to me and makes me feel good.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、時制の誤りや不自然な表現があります。具体的な理由を述べ、正しい文法を使いましょう。例えば、「Yes, I love listening to music because it makes me happy, and I think singing can make others happy too.」のように答えると良いです。

例: Yes, I love listening to music because it makes me happy, and I think singing can make others happy too.

× Yeah, I really love thinking because if I thinks I always use my services, so I always singing when I have a free time for example, such as in the bathroom or time to go to the school.

✓ Yeah, I really love singing because if I think I always use my services, so I am always singing when I have free time, for example, such as in the bathroom or on the way to school.

The verb 'thinks' should be 'think' because the subject is 'I', which requires the base form without 's'. Also, 'singing' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'A free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Time to go to the school' should be 'on the way to school' or 'when going to school' for natural expression and correct preposition usage.

× I have never learned about the seniors, but in the future I want to learn about the thinking because I want to improve my singing skills to singing at the karaoke.

✓ I have never learned about singing, but in the future I want to learn singing because I want to improve my singing skills to sing at karaoke.

The phrase 'learned about the seniors' is incorrect; it should be 'learned about singing'. Also, 'learn about the thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'learn singing'. The phrase 'to singing' should be 'to sing' because after 'to' the base form of the verb is used. 'At the karaoke' should be 'at karaoke' or 'at the karaoke place' depending on context.

× I want to sing for my brother because he always listen to my singing songs and he always give me a good feeling so I want to sing for my brother.

✓ I want to sing for my brother because he always listens to my singing and he always gives me a good feeling, so I want to sing for my brother.

The verbs 'listen' and 'give' need an 's' at the end to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'singing songs' is redundant; 'singing' alone is sufficient.

× Yeah, in my case, I really love listening to music and when I was listening to the music I always feel happy. So by seeing people can be more happier.

✓ Yeah, in my case, I really love listening to music and when I listen to music I always feel happy. So I think people can be happier by listening to music.

The phrase 'when I was listening' should be 'when I listen' to match the present tense context. 'More happier' is incorrect because 'happier' already implies comparison; 'more' is redundant. The sentence 'So by seeing people can be more happier' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'So I think people can be happier by listening to music' for clarity and correctness.