Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. To improve, complete your sentence and provide a clear reason for liking singing. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and concise.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm not a professional, singing makes me feel happy and confident.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains hesitation and filler sounds like 'S uh'. To improve, avoid fillers and speak confidently. Also, you can add a brief explanation to enrich your answer.

例: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons, but I enjoy practicing on my own by listening to my favourite songs.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains hesitation. To improve, complete your thoughts and avoid filler words. Provide specific reasons why you want to sing for your family.

例: I would love to sing for my family during gatherings because it brings us closer and creates joyful memories together.

提案: Your answer is good but slightly repetitive. To improve, use varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more coherent and engaging.

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness as it acts like a form of meditation, helping people to relax and feel calm when they listen to music.

× I like singing because.

✓ I like singing because it makes me happy.

The sentence 'I like singing because.' is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because'. To correct it, a reason should be added to complete the sentence, such as 'it makes me happy'. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I have never taken any professional training for learning to S uh for singing.

✓ I have never taken any professional training for learning to sing.

The phrase 'learning to S uh for singing' contains a filler 'S uh' and an incorrect phrase. The correct form is 'learning to sing'. The verb 'sing' should be in its base form after 'to' as an infinitive. Removing the filler and correcting the verb form improves clarity and grammar.