Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表達了喜歡唱歌的原因，但語法和用詞上有些小錯誤，例如"sing together"應為"singing together"，且句子結構可以更自然流暢。建議使用更正確的動名詞形式，並簡化句子使其更自然。

例: Yes, I love singing, especially with my friends on weekends. Singing together not only helps me relax but also strengthens our friendship, making me feel happier and less stressed.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤，例如"practice make it perfect"應為"practice makes perfect"，且句子結構不夠清晰。建議使用正確的語法並組織句子，使表達更自然且有邏輯。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I really love singing. I believe that practice makes perfect, so the more you sing, the better you become.

提案: 回答中有拼寫錯誤，如"seeing"應為"singing"，且句子結構稍顯混亂。建議注意拼寫並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

例: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me express my emotions and personal experiences. For me, a song feels like a private dream where I can share my feelings freely.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤，如"helps"應為"help"，"get really happiness"應為"feel really happy"。建議使用正確的動詞形式和自然的表達方式，並提供更具體的例子。

例: Yes, I think the rhythm and the lyrics help a lot. For example, when I listen to K-pop from one of my favorite groups, I always feel really happy.

× I find that sing together not only helps me relax but also strengthens our friendship, which makes me feel happier and less stressed.

✓ I find that singing together not only helps me relax but also strengthens our friendship, which makes me feel happier and less stressed.

The verb 'sing' should be in the '-ing' form 'singing' after 'find that' to function as a gerund, which acts as the subject of the clause. This is a common structure in English where an action is described as a noun.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I really love to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing before, but I really love singing.

After 'love', the verb is usually followed by the gerund form '-ing' rather than the infinitive 'to sing'. Using 'love singing' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I think maybe practice make it perfect so when you start to sing and you'll sing better.

✓ I think maybe practice makes it perfect, so when you start to sing, you'll sing better.

The subject 'practice' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number (subject-verb agreement). Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I want to sing for myself because seeing helps me express my emotions and personal experience.

✓ I want to sing for myself because singing helps me express my emotions and personal experience.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing', which is the gerund form of 'sing' and fits the context of expressing emotions through singing.

× Yes, I think the rhythm and the lyrics helps a lot.

✓ Yes, I think the rhythm and the lyrics help a lot.

The subject is compound ('the rhythm and the lyrics'), which is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number.

× Like I listen to the K pop of one of my favorite clubs, I always get really happiness.

✓ Like when I listen to the K-pop of one of my favorite groups, I always feel really happy.

'Happiness' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective 'happy' to describe the feeling. Also, 'K pop' should be hyphenated as 'K-pop', and 'clubs' is better replaced with 'groups' when referring to music bands.