Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中出现了“seeing”错误，应为“singing”，影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，避免词汇错误。同时，回答较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词和更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For instance, I usually sing after studying to unwind and feel refreshed.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但缺少连接词使句子之间显得有些断裂。建议使用连接词如“however”或“but”来增强连贯性，并且可以补充更多细节说明学乐器如何帮助学习音乐。

例: Well, I have never had formal singing lessons; however, I have learned to play instruments like the piano and drums, which have helped me understand music better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“sing for them makes me feel”应为“singing for them makes me feel”。建议注意动名词的使用，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my friends because singing for them makes me feel joyful and relaxed. Also, we often sing together after school, which is very enjoyable.

提案: 回答中“really stress”表达不准确，应为“relieve stress”。建议注意词汇搭配的准确性，并使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Of course, singing can help people relax and relieve stress. Besides, karaoke is a popular activity that allows people to have fun and enjoy themselves.

× Yeah, I really like seeing because seeing is a good way to release myself, relax myself and release the stress.

✓ Yeah, I really like singing because singing is a good way to release myself, relax myself and release the stress.

这里的动词应该是“singing”而不是“seeing”，因为题目是关于唱歌的，使用动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× For example, I usually sing after my study.

✓ For example, I usually sing after my studies.

“study”作为名词时，表示学习的活动，复数形式“studies”更合适，表示多次学习或学习时间。

× Well, actually I have never had formal singing lessons, but I learned some instruments like piano and drum.

✓ Well, actually I have never had formal singing lessons, but I have learned some instruments like piano and drums.

这里应使用现在完成时“have learned”表示过去到现在的经历；“drum”应为复数“drums”，表示多种乐器。

× Well, actually I have never had formal singing lessons, but I learned some instruments like piano and drum.

✓ Well, actually I have never had formal singing lessons, but I have learned some instruments like piano and drums.

“drum”应使用复数形式“drums”，因为通常指多种打击乐器。

× I want to sing for my friends because sing for them makes me feel joyful and relax.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because singing for them makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

“sing”应改为动名词“singing”作主语；“relax”应改为形容词“relaxed”描述感受。

× Also, we sing together after school.

✓ Also, we sing together after school.

此句无语法错误，时态正确。

× Of course, people can relax themselves and really stress through singing.

✓ Of course, people can relax themselves and really relieve stress through singing.

“stress”作为名词时不能直接用作动词，应使用“relieve stress”表示缓解压力。

× Of course, people can relax themselves and really stress through singing.

✓ Of course, people can relax themselves and really relieve stress through singing.

“stress”不能作为动词使用，需用“relieve stress”表达缓解压力的意思。