Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简短，表达的观点明确但缺乏具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议增加具体例子或描述，使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I improve my skills.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，缺少清晰的结构和连接词。建议使用完整句子，明确表达学习方式，并用连接词连接句子。

例: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I have taught myself by repeatedly singing along to my favorite songs, which helped me improve gradually.

提案: 回答较长但表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I don't usually sing for a specific person; instead, I sing whenever I feel like it, mainly for my own enjoyment rather than to impress others.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子未完成，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并补充具体原因或例子。

例: Definitely, I think singing not only entertains us but also helps relieve stress and improve our mood, which brings happiness to many people.

× I like singing because I think singing can release our stress and it also gives me some achievements.

✓ I like singing because I think singing can release our stress and it also gives me some achievement.

这里的achievement是不可数名词，表示成就感，不能用复数形式achievements。应使用单数形式achievement。

× I didn't learn systematically, but I did learn by myself.

✓ I didn't learn systematically, but I learned by myself.

这里的did是助动词，后面动词应使用原形learn，但为了表达过去的动作，应该直接用过去式learned，保持时态一致。

× Just repeat the same lyrics as the songs.

✓ Just repeat the same lyrics of the songs.

这里应使用介词of来表示歌词属于歌曲，as用法不当。

× Yeah, I played it while singing.

✓ Yeah, I played it while singing along.

这里缺少along，表示边唱边播放，语义更完整。

× Actually, I don't have a specific person that I like to sing for because I usually sing whenever I want to rather than showing off in front of someone or expressing my favorite somebody, that kind of.

✓ Actually, I don't have a specific person that I like to sing for because I usually sing whenever I want to rather than showing off in front of someone or expressing my feelings for someone I like.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，使用了不恰当的短语favorite somebody，应改为表达喜欢某人的感情，句子更通顺。

× Definitely, I think seeing is not just a way to amuse ourselves, but it also have the utility that you could make it to relieve some stress and.

✓ Definitely, I think singing is not just a way to amuse ourselves, but it also has the utility that you can use it to relieve some stress.

这里singing被误写为seeing，动词have应与主语it保持一致用has，句子末尾不完整，补充完整表达。