Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yeah, definitely. Personally, I really love singing because I was interested in the music. I and I always play the piano, play the guitar. So when I play the guitar, I always sing some songs and it is really therapeutic and a kind of entertainment for me.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Well, actually in my undergraduate student's life I have to persuade another under master's degree called the music. So in that course we have a lot of training that how to sing. But I think most of them is about theory, but not so practical.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Actually, if I have to say, it's nobody but myself because, you know, I'm not really confident in my songs. So I always sing alone and in my apartment and I seldom sing the songs before a lot of people.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Well, it's hard to say. I mean, if you seem really good, it's definitely a therapeutic things. But if you are, if you don't interested in the saying, it sometimes is a kind of noisy and makes people more nervous.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I was interested in the music”应为“I am interested in music”，且句子结构重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I have a strong interest in music. I often play the piano and guitar, and singing along while playing is both therapeutic and entertaining for me.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。
例: Yes, during my undergraduate studies, I took a music course where we received training on singing techniques. However, most of the lessons focused on theory rather than practical singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较为自然，但有些表达可以更简洁流畅。建议减少口语化词汇，使用更正式的表达，并注意句子连贯性。
例: Honestly, I usually sing just for myself because I lack confidence in my singing. I prefer to sing alone in my apartment and rarely perform in front of others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且逻辑不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I think singing can bring happiness if someone sings well because it can be therapeutic. However, if a person is not interested in singing, it might seem noisy and even make them feel nervous.
文法
× I and I always play the piano, play the guitar.
✓ I always play the piano and the guitar.
句子中重复使用了“I and I”，这是多余且错误的。应使用单数主语“I”，并用连词连接两个动作。
× I was interested in the music.
✓ I was interested in music.
“music”作为不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。
× I have to persuade another under master's degree called the music.
✓ I have to pursue another master's degree in music.
“persuade”用错，应为“pursue”（追求）；“under master's degree”表达不正确，应为“master's degree”；“the music”前不加定冠词。
× in my undergraduate student's life
✓ in my undergraduate student life
“undergraduate student life”是固定搭配，不需要所有格“student's”。
× most of them is about theory
✓ most of them are about theory
“most of them”指复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。
× if I have to say, it's nobody but myself
✓ if I have to say, it's nobody but me
“but”后面应接宾格代词“me”，而非反身代词“myself”。
× it's definitely a therapeutic things
✓ it's definitely a therapeutic thing
“a”是单数冠词，后面应接单数名词“thing”，而非复数“things”。
× if you don't interested in the saying
✓ if you aren't interested in singing
“interested”后应接系动词“be”而非助动词“do”；“the saying”应为“singing”，且不加定冠词。
× if you seem really good
✓ if you sing really well
“seem”用法不当，应使用动词“sing”；“good”作为形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词“well”。
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