Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议在回答中加入更多具体原因和感受，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. For example, whenever I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs makes me feel happier and more at ease.

提案: 语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且简洁明了地说明学习唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing because I wanted to protect my voice and avoid damaging it by using the wrong techniques.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议分句表达并使用连接词，使句子更自然。

例: I want to sing for my wife. I prepare a lovely song every day, and whenever I have the opportunity, I will sing it to her.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用正确的句式，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and enjoy the moment.

× Yes, I like singing because I can feel happy and relax when I'm singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I can feel happy and relaxed when I'm singing.

这里的'relax'应该用形容词'relaxed'来描述感受，表示“感到放松”，而不是动词形式。

× Yeah, I'd have learned how to sing because I wanted to protect my my voice if I use the wrong method to make the voice.

✓ Yeah, I'd learned how to sing because I wanted to protect my voice if I used the wrong method to make the voice.

这里使用过去完成时'd'd have learned'不合适，应该用过去完成时或过去时'd'd learned'。另外，条件句中应使用过去时态'used'，表示与过去事实相符。

× Yeah, I'd have learned how to sing because I wanted to protect my my voice if I use the wrong method to make the voice.

✓ Yeah, I'd learned how to sing because I wanted to protect my voice if I used the wrong method to make the voice.

句中重复使用了'my'，应删除多余的一个。

× I want to sing for my wife and I prepare the lovely song every day and when I have opportunity I will sing this song to her.

✓ I want to sing for my wife and I prepare a lovely song every day and when I have the opportunity I will sing this song to her.

'song'前应加不定冠词'a'，'opportunity'前应加定冠词'the'，因为特指某个机会。

× I want to sing for my wife and I prepare the lovely song every day and when I have opportunity I will sing this song to her.

✓ I want to sing for my wife and I prepare a lovely song every day and when I have the opportunity I will sing this song to her.

'opportunity'是可数名词，前面需要冠词，缺少冠词导致用法错误。

× I do think so because singing can make people makes people feel comfortable and enjoyable.

✓ I do think so because singing can make people feel comfortable and enjoy themselves.

句中重复出现'makes people'，应删除多余的'makes'。'enjoyable'是形容词，描述事物，描述人的感受应使用动词短语'enjoy themselves'。