Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构较为简单，且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my feelings freely and uplifts my mood whenever I feel down.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并且更清楚地表达自己是否学过唱歌。

例: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I did attend music classes at school where I learned some basic music theory.

提案: 回答表达了想为家人唱歌的原因，但用词不够准确，如“make some appreciation to me”不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并增加细节说明。

例: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and show their appreciation, which motivates me a lot.

提案: 回答简洁但略显重复，建议使用更多样的词汇和句式，增加具体的理由或例子，使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, singing can definitely bring joy to people because it helps them express their feelings and creates a positive atmosphere.

× No, I I haven't learned how to sing, but during my school years I have. I have music lessons and I learn some music knowledge.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but during my school years I had music lessons and learned some music knowledge.

这里时态使用不正确。描述过去的经历时，应使用过去时态。'I have music lessons'和'I learn'应改为过去时'had'和'learned'。

× I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me and make some appreciation to me.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me and show some appreciation to me.

动词'做出感谢'应使用'show appreciation'，而不是'make appreciation'，这是固定搭配。

× I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me and make some appreciation to me.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me and show some appreciation towards me.

'appreciation'后面通常搭配介词'towards'表示对某人的感谢，'to me'不合适。