Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“I'm fancy to singing”应为“I fancy singing”或“I like singing”。回答内容有些冗长且不够连贯，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, when I feel stressed, I often go to karaoke with my best friends to have fun and relieve pressure.

提案: 回答内容基本符合要求，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误，如“I will know there was”应为“I know there was”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的连贯性。

例: Actually, I have never taken professional singing lessons. However, I used to watch a popular TV show called The Singer with my mom when I was young, and I learned to sing by imitating the performers on the show.

提案: 回答内容具体且有情感，但语言表达稍显重复和不够自然，如“there are a wide range of people that I want to sing for”可以更简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯。

例: I want to sing for many people, but especially for my mom. Her birthday is coming next month, so I am preparing a special song to show my love and appreciation for her.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“if I learn and to listening”不通顺，句子未完成。建议简化句子结构，确保表达完整且自然。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and encouragement to people. For example, when I listen to beautiful songs, especially Taylor Swift's country music, it always lifts my mood.

× Yeah, certainly I'm fancy to singing and there are a wide range of occasions that I would think.

✓ Yeah, certainly I fancy singing and there are a wide range of occasions that I can think of.

动词fancy后面应直接接动名词形式singing，而不是介词to加动名词。句中表达“我能想到的”应使用短语can think of。

× And for example, when I feel stressed out, I will choose to go to the karaoke with my best friends and guess what we can even stay in the cavalcade for.

✓ And for example, when I feel stressed out, I will choose to go to karaoke with my best friends and guess what, we can even stay in the cavalcade.

go to the karaoke中karaoke前不需要冠词the。stay in the cavalcade for中for多余，应去掉。

× Well, in fact, I've never learned how to sing professionally.

✓ Well, in fact, I've never learnt how to sing professionally.

learned和learnt都是learn的过去分词，英式英语中更常用learnt，保持时态一致即可。

× However, I will know there was a famous TV program called The Singer.

✓ However, I know there was a famous TV program called The Singer.

这里表达现在知道某事，不能用将来时will know，应使用一般现在时know。

× So yeah, I learned by myself and because I tried to imitate the singers.

✓ So yeah, I learned by myself because I tried to imitate the singers.

and because连接两个原因状语不合适，应去掉and。

× Well, there are a wide range of people that I want to sing for.

✓ Well, there is a wide range of people that I want to sing for.

a wide range是单数短语，谓语动词应使用单数is。

× Lots.

✓ A lot.

Lots单独使用不完整，应使用a lot表达“很多”。

× Yeah, definitely. I do consider that singing can bring happiness and even encouragement to people and take myself as an example if I learn and to listening to some beautiful music songs, especially some countryside music of Taylor Swift and.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I do consider that singing can bring happiness and even encouragement to people. Take myself as an example: if I learn and listen to some beautiful music songs, especially some countryside music of Taylor Swift.

learn后应接动词原形listen，而不是to listening。句子结构不完整，需分句。