Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且表达了个人感受，但部分表达不够地道，如“recharge my battery”可以用更常见的表达，且“loosen up in my mind and the body”语法不准确。建议使用更自然的短语，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I often go to karaoke alone because it helps me relax both mentally and physically.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅，如“to seriously”应为“too seriously”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

例: Actually, I have never received professional training. I don't want to take it too seriously; I just enjoy the emotions and beautiful rhythms in singing.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“self doubt problem”应为“self-doubt”，且“The Who sang the song Who says by Selena Gomez”表达混乱。建议理清句子结构，准确表达意思。

例: Actually, I like to sing for myself. When I feel self-doubt, I sing "Who Says" by Selena Gomez to cheer myself up.

提案: 回答中存在词汇和语法错误，如“doubly”用法不当，“a nature of you human beings”表达不准确，“gut the emotions”用词错误。建议使用正确词汇和表达，确保句子通顺。

例: Yes, definitely. I think singing is a natural part of being human, and even if you don't understand the lyrics, you can still feel the emotions the singer wants to convey.

× I even go to the karaoke by myself.

✓ I even go to karaoke by myself.

这里的“the karaoke”中“karaoke”作为不可数名词，不需要加冠词“the”。

× I even go to the karaoke by myself.

✓ I even go to karaoke by myself.

“go to karaoke”是固定搭配，表示去唱卡拉OK，不需要加冠词“the”。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”和“learned”都是“learn”的过去分词，英式英语用“learnt”，美式英语用“learned”，根据语境选择一致的时态形式。

× I don't want to do these things to seriously.

✓ I don't want to do these things too seriously.

“to seriously”应为“too seriously”，表示“过于认真”，这里“too”是副词，修饰形容词“seriously”。

× Sometimes I face a self doubt problem.

✓ Sometimes I face a self-doubt problem.

“self doubt”应连写为“self-doubt”，表示“自我怀疑”，且作为名词短语。

× In that time I will sing The Who sang the song Who says by Selena Gomez to myself.

✓ At that time, I will sing the song "Who Says" by Selena Gomez to myself.

“In that time”应为“At that time”，表示“那时”；“The Who sang the song”结构错误，应直接说“the song 'Who Says' by Selena Gomez”；“to myself”表示对自己唱歌，位置正确。

× Yes, doubly.

✓ Yes, definitely.

“doubly”意为“双重地”，此处应使用“definitely”，表示“肯定地”，更符合语境。

× I think singing is just like a nature of you human beings and you don't need to understand the lyrics.

✓ I think singing is just like the nature of you human beings and you don't need to understand the lyrics.

“nature”前应加定冠词“the”，表示“人类的天性”。

× You can gut the emotions that singers want to express.

✓ You can get the emotions that singers want to express.

“gut”是错误用词，应为“get”，表示“感受到”情感。