Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构不完整。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，避免拼写错误，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy, especially when I was young. I usually sing with my friends at KTV, which helps us maintain our friendship.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子缺乏逻辑性。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确表达是否学过唱歌，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: I have never taken professional singing lessons, but I enjoy following popular singers on television. My friends say that I sing quite well.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以适当扩展理由，使内容更丰富。建议增加原因或感受，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I don't want to sing for anyone; I just enjoy singing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Absolutely, singing helps people feel better. For example, whenever I feel sad, I turn on the radio and listen to my favorite music, and I feel happier almost immediately.

× Yes I like seeing when I feel happy especially when I was young.

✓ Yes, I like singing when I feel happy, especially when I was young.

这里动词应该用动名词形式表示喜欢的动作，'seeing' 应改为 'singing'。

× I usually with my friend to sing at KTV.

✓ I usually sing with my friends at KTV.

动词 'sing' 需要与介词 'with' 搭配，且 'friend' 应为复数形式 'friends'，表示通常和朋友一起唱歌。

× It help us to keep friendship.

✓ It helps us to keep friendship.

主语 'It' 是单数，谓语动词应加 -s，变为 'helps'。

× I haven't heard singing with professional singer but I enjoy follow the popular singer of the television.

✓ I haven't heard singing with professional singers, but I enjoy following popular singers on television.

'singing with professional singer' 中 'singer' 应为复数 'singers'，'follow' 应用动名词形式 'following'，'of the television' 应改为 'on television'。

× My friend told us I do it.

✓ My friend told me to do it.

'told us I do it' 结构不正确，应为 'told me to do it'，表示朋友告诉我去做某事。

× Absolutely, seeing help people feel better and love example when I feel was bad every time I'll turn on the radio and follow my favorite music.

✓ Absolutely, singing helps people feel better. For example, when I feel bad, every time I'll turn on the radio and follow my favorite music.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，动词 'help' 应加 -s 变为 'helps'，句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整时态和表达。

× when I feel was bad every time I'll turn on the radio and follow my favorite music.

✓ When I feel bad, every time I'll turn on the radio and follow my favorite music.

'feel was bad' 结构错误，应为 'feel bad'，保持现在时态表达感受。