Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，建议使用正确的句式表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me build my confidence.

提案: 回答简短且不够自然，建议使用完整句子并稍作扩展，使回答更自然流畅。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I enjoy singing in my free time.

提案: 回答重复且缺乏细节，建议避免重复并增加原因或情感表达，使回答更丰富。

例: I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答较好，表达了原因和感受，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me show my confidence. Moreover, when I sing, I feel more relaxed and happy, and it also allows me to express my emotions better.

× I like singing because I think singing is prove my confidence.

✓ I like singing because I think singing proves my confidence.

这里动词 'prove' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'proves'，因为主语是单数的 'singing'。另外，'is prove' 结构不正确，应直接用动词 'proves'。

× I haven't learned singing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing.

动词 'learn' 后面通常接不定式 'to do something'，这里应该用 'learn how to sing' 表示学会唱歌，而不是直接用动名词 'singing'。

× I want to sing for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I want to sing for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes I do because singing helps me show my confidence.

✓ Yes I do because singing helps me show my confidence.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× When I sing I feel more relaxed and happy and it also allows me to express my emotions better.

✓ When I sing I feel more relaxed and happy and it also allows me to express my emotions better.

该句语法正确，无需修改。