Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
No, I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice when it comes to singing. That the reason that makes me don't like singing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Yes, When I grow up, I used to sing because I had the ambition that I want to be a gospel music singer. But at the time goes on, I realized that I'm not a good singer. That's why I end up stopping singing.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I want to sing for my son's birthday because I want to do something specific for his birthday party that will be something that he will remember each and every time.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I'm down, I listen to gospel music to lift up my spirit. Other people, they listen to different music like R&B, house music, different kind of music.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using smoother phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your thoughts.
例: No, I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice, which makes me feel uncomfortable when I sing.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer provides good content but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense consistently and link your ideas more smoothly.
例: Yes, when I was growing up, I used to sing because I wanted to become a gospel singer. However, as time went on, I realized I wasn't very good, so I eventually stopped singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve flow.
例: I would like to sing for my son's birthday to make the party special and create a memorable moment for him.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 80.0提案: Good answer with examples, but try to avoid small grammar mistakes and improve sentence flow by using linking words.
例: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, when I'm feeling down, I listen to gospel music to lift my spirits, while others might enjoy R&B or house music.
文法
× That the reason that makes me don't like singing.
✓ That is the reason that makes me not like singing.
The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' to form a complete sentence, and 'don't' should be 'not' after 'makes me' to maintain correct sentence structure and negation.
× Yes, When I grow up, I used to sing because I had the ambition that I want to be a gospel music singer.
✓ Yes, when I grew up, I used to sing because I had the ambition to be a gospel music singer.
The phrase 'When I grow up' should be in past tense 'When I grew up' to match the past context. Also, 'that I want to be' should be 'to be' to correctly express the ambition.
× But at the time goes on, I realized that I'm not a good singer.
✓ But as time went on, I realized that I was not a good singer.
The phrase 'at the time goes on' is incorrect; it should be 'as time went on' to indicate past progression. Also, 'I'm not' should be 'I was not' to maintain past tense consistency.
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