Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I like singing very much because lots of people tell me that my voice is very good and I feel some kind of sense of achievement by those compliments. So I love singing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
No, I have never formally learned how to sing from professional teacher. However, I am lucky to have some friends who are very talented singers and they often give me useful feedback on my voice and stage performance skills. Their advice has helped me improve a little.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I would say my grandma because she is one of the people who encourage me, don't stop singing and I think she always gives me some positive feedback.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, definitely. For example, whenever I feel stressed or upset, I like to listen to uplifting and cheerful songs. This usually helps me improve my mood and makes me feel happier and more relaxed. So I believe singing or listening to music can be a great way to bring happiness to people.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复，建议简化语言，避免冗余，同时增加具体细节以增强说服力。
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because many people compliment my voice, which gives me a great sense of achievement and motivates me to keep improving.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富词汇。
例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but fortunately, some talented friends often provide me with valuable feedback on my voice and stage presence, which has helped me improve gradually.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议注意句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并提供更多细节。
例: I would like to sing for my grandma because she always encourages me to keep singing and gives me positive feedback, which means a lot to me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，建议尝试使用更多高级词汇和多样化句型以提升表达水平。
例: Absolutely. Whenever I'm stressed or upset, listening to uplifting and cheerful songs helps lift my spirits and relax me. Therefore, I believe that singing or enjoying music is an effective way to bring happiness to people.
文法
× No, I have never formally learned how to sing from professional teacher.
✓ No, I have never formally learned how to sing from a professional teacher.
这里缺少冠词“a”，在英语中，单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。应在“professional teacher”前加上不定冠词“a”。
× I would say my grandma because she is one of the people who encourage me, don't stop singing and I think she always gives me some positive feedback.
✓ I would say my grandma because she is one of the people who encourage me, doesn't stop singing and I think she always gives me some positive feedback.
主语是第三人称单数“she”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“doesn't stop”，而不是“don't stop”。
× I would say my grandma because she is one of the people who encourage me, don't stop singing and I think she always gives me some positive feedback.
✓ I would say my grandma because she is one of the people who encourage me, doesn't stop singing, and I think she always gives me some positive feedback.
连接词“and”前应加逗号以分隔句子成分，且“doesn't stop”是正确的第三人称单数形式。
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