Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and makes me feel like I'm flying in the sky, which brings me great happiness.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，避免口语化的表达，增强句子连贯性。

例: I have never taken professional singing classes, but I often watch videos about singing that give me new ideas on how to improve my skills.

提案: 回答内容较好，但部分表达不够地道，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

例: I want to sing for my mom because she gave birth to me and raised me. She has provided everything I need, and I want to express my gratitude to her through my singing.

提案: 回答中多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和语法，明确表达观点。

例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it allows people to forget their worries and enjoy their own voice, which is a good way to relax.

× I really like saying sing for me is a kind of way to relax myself and when I was saying I feel like I just fly in the sky, which made me very happy and I wanna do it.

✓ I really like singing. Singing for me is a kind of way to relax myself, and when I am singing, I feel like I am flying in the sky, which makes me very happy and I want to do it.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）表示喜欢的动作，不能用动词原形。这里'saying'应改为'singing'，且时态要一致。

× Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I always watching some videos about seeing which give me some new ideas about how to say and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

✓ Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I am always watching some videos about singing which give me some new ideas about how to sing and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

现在进行时表示经常做的动作时，动词要用be动词+动词-ing形式。'always watching'前缺少be动词'am'。

× Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I always watching some videos about seeing which give me some new ideas about how to say and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

✓ Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I always watch some videos about singing which give me some new ideas about how to sing and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

这里表达习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，动词用原形watch而不是watching。

× Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I always watching some videos about seeing which give me some new ideas about how to say and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

✓ Well, I have never joined any professional music classes, but I always watch some videos about singing which give me some new ideas about how to sing and how to improve my singing skills just like that.

'seeing'应为'singing'，这里是代指唱歌，使用错误的代词导致意思不清。

× I want to sing for my mom. She gives birth to me and raises me up. She is really a woman who provided everything I need and I want. I want to express my thanks for her just through my voice.

✓ I want to sing for my mom. She gave birth to me and raised me up. She is really a woman who provides everything I need and want. I want to express my thanks to her just through my voice.

时态不一致，描述过去事件应使用过去时；'provided'应为'provides'表示现在持续状态；'thanks for her'应为'thanks to her'。

× Seeing did bring happiness to people. When we are seeing, we just ignore everything around us and enjoy our voice to know how seeing take happiness to us and if that's really a useful way to relax.

✓ Singing does bring happiness to people. When we are singing, we just ignore everything around us and enjoy our voice to know how singing brings happiness to us and if that's really a useful way to relax.

'Seeing'应为'singing'，动词时态和形式错误，'did bring'改为'does bring'表示一般现在时，'take'应为'brings'。