Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Being honest I'm not keen on to singing as I have a lower voice which is unusual for singers. However in my free time I like do karaoke at home with my sister but I never ever try to sing in a different areas like stadium so I don't consider myself as a singer.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
According to my memory, I have never ever tried to take some practical courses for singing. But according to my memory we had a course called Musics where we learned about the course. However, I can't recall about the process of learning singing at school.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
If I have a chance and I improve my vocal abilities, I would love to sing for my mom in her birthday because according to my opinion he like she likes listening some musics but my voice is not in that level that she may enjoy.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
This is really up to questions by meaning. So I think everyone has their opinion about being happy and I think singing is one of the point of sense of happiness, but for me I would say no.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolarni tuzatish va gaplarni yanada tabiiyroq qilish kerak. Masalan, 'keen on to singing' o'rniga 'keen on singing' deyish kerak. Shuningdek, gaplarni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching.
例: Honestly, I'm not very keen on singing because I have a low voice, which is unusual for singers. However, I enjoy doing karaoke at home with my sister in my free time. I have never tried singing in public places like a stadium, so I don't consider myself a singer.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 60.0提案: Gaplaringizni yanada aniq va tabiiy qilish uchun takroriy so'zlardan qoching va grammatikani yaxshilang. Masalan, 'according to my memory' o'rniga 'as far as I remember' deyish mumkin. Shuningdek, 'Musics' o'rniga 'music' so'zini ishlating.
例: As far as I remember, I have never taken any practical singing courses. We had a music class at school where we learned about music, but I don't recall learning how to sing.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 55.0提案: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va aniqroq qilish uchun gaplarni qayta tuzing. Masalan, 'according to my opinion he like she likes' o'rniga 'I think she likes' deyish kerak. Shuningdek, 'musics' o'rniga 'music' so'zini ishlating.
例: If I had the chance and improved my singing skills, I would love to sing for my mom on her birthday because I think she enjoys listening to music. However, my voice is not good enough yet for her to enjoy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 50.0提案: Javobingizni aniqroq va tabiiyroq qilish uchun gaplarni soddalashtiring va grammatik xatolarni tuzating. Masalan, 'This is really up to questions by meaning' o'rniga 'It depends on the person' deyish mumkin. Shuningdek, fikringizni aniqroq ifoda eting.
例: It depends on the person. I believe that singing can bring happiness to many people, but personally, I don't feel that way.
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