Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复表达，并且使句子更连贯自然。

例: I don't like singing because I often sing out of tune and feel self-conscious. However, I do enjoy singing alone in the shower where I feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和句子结构，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but a friend who is good at singing once taught me some techniques. I practiced one song using those tips, which I found helpful.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且明确表达意图。

例: I rarely sing for others. Usually, I sing alone in the shower because it helps me relax and unwind.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够流畅，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然连贯。

例: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song. Happy songs usually make people feel joyful, while sad songs might evoke sadness. Singing is contagious and can spread emotions to listeners.

× Actually I don't like singing because I always sing out of tune and I'm a tone deaf.

✓ Actually I don't like singing because I always sing out of tune and I'm tone deaf.

“a tone deaf”中“tone deaf”是形容词短语，不需要冠词“a”，应直接使用“I'm tone deaf”。

× I feel awkward or unconfident when singing in front of other people's but when I was in shower or with.

✓ I feel awkward or unconfident when singing in front of other people, but when I am in the shower or alone, I feel fine.

“other people's”错误使用了所有格，应为“other people”；句子不完整且缺少谓语，需补充完整句子。

× Actually I didn't learn to sing, but my friend who was really good at singing once told me some techniques about singing.

✓ Actually I haven't learned to sing, but my friend who is really good at singing once told me some techniques about singing.

此处谈论经历，使用现在完成时更合适；“didn't learn”改为“haven't learned”；“was”改为“is”因为朋友现在仍然擅长唱歌。

× Actually just learned the only song, but I think it's helpful.

✓ Actually I just learned one song, but I think it's helpful.

缺少主语“I”，且“the only song”用法不当，应为“one song”。

× Usually I tend to sing alone in the shower because I feel relaxed. Relax and chill is a good way to unwind and usually I would choose to sing in front of my clothes.

✓ Usually I tend to sing alone in the shower because I feel relaxed. Relaxing and chilling is a good way to unwind, and usually I would choose to sing in front of my clothes.

“Relax and chill”应改为动名词形式“Relaxing and chilling”；“in front of my clothes”表达不清，应为“in front of my clothes”可能是误用，建议改为“in front of my closet”或“in front of the mirror”。

× Usually I would choose to sing in front of my clothes.

✓ Usually I would choose to sing in front of my closet.

“in front of my clothes”不合适，正确表达应为“in front of my closet”（衣柜）或“in front of the mirror”（镜子）。

× If the song is related to happiness and satisfaction and it would definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ If the song is related to happiness and satisfaction, it will definitely bring happiness to people.

句子缺少逗号且时态不一致，应将“would”改为“will”以符合条件句的时态规则。

× But if it's sad or monoclonal song it would cause opposing effects.

✓ But if it's a sad or monotonous song, it would cause opposing effects.

“monoclonal”用词错误，应为“monotonous”（单调的）；缺少冠词“a”。

× And I think singing is infectious, so it can bring the same emotion to people who heard it.

✓ And I think singing is infectious, so it can bring the same emotion to people who hear it.

“people who heard it”时态不一致，应为现在时“people who hear it”，因为这里指一般事实。