Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有发音错误（"seeing" 应为 "singing"），且句子结构不够清晰，表达略显重复。建议注意发音准确性，并简洁明了地表达观点，例如先给出明确的主题句，再用一两个具体理由支持。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax when I feel stressed.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法不准确的问题，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Not really. I only took music classes like most people, but sometimes I learn singing techniques from professional singers on TV programs.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如"has"后面缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并避免重复。

例: I want to sing for my best friend because we both love singing. She has always been my biggest fan during karaoke sessions and encourages me to sing confidently in front of others.

提案: 回答中有发音错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且句子结构不够自然。建议注意发音准确，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式描述感受。

例: Yes, absolutely. Singing helps me relax, especially when I sing in the shower. It makes me feel like a superstar on stage.

× I like seeing actually because I think it can help me to express my feelings and can make me feel relaxed when I was when I feel stressed.

✓ I like singing actually because I think it can help me to express my feelings and can make me feel relaxed when I feel stressed.

这里的动词应该是表示喜欢的活动，应该用动名词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'。另外，'when I was when I feel stressed'结构混乱，应改为'when I feel stressed'。

× I like seeing actually because I think it can help me to express my feelings and can make me feel relaxed when I was when I feel stressed.

✓ I like singing actually because I think it can help me to express my feelings and can make me feel relaxed when I feel stressed.

句中出现了时态混用，'when I was when I feel stressed'不符合时态一致原则，应统一为一般现在时'when I feel stressed'。

× I sometimes would learn how to sing from the singing programs and those professional singers will teach you how to sing sometimes.

✓ I sometimes learn how to sing from singing programs and those professional singers teach you how to sing sometimes.

这里表达习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，'would learn'和'will teach'不合适，应改为'learn'和'teach'。

× I want to sing for my best friend because we both love singing and she has. She has always been the biggest fan when we were when we sing karaoke and she is really encouraging and has motivated me to seem confidently in front of others.

✓ I want to sing for my best friend because we both love singing and she has always been the biggest fan when we sing karaoke. She is really encouraging and has motivated me to sing confidently in front of others.

句子中'she has.'重复且不完整，应合并。'when we were when we sing karaoke'时态混乱，应改为'when we sing karaoke'。'to seem confidently'用词错误，应为'to sing confidently'。

× has motivated me to seem confidently in front of others.

✓ has motivated me to sing confidently in front of others.

'seem'是动词，后面接副词'confidently'不合适，正确表达应为动词'sing'加副词'confidently'。

× In my opinion, I think seeing can helps me feel relaxed and uh, especially when I am taking a shower.

✓ In my opinion, I think singing can help me feel relaxed, especially when I am taking a shower.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'can helps'中'can'后应接动词原形，故应为'can help'。

× In my opinion, I think seeing can helps me feel relaxed and uh, especially when I am taking a shower.

✓ In my opinion, I think singing can help me feel relaxed, especially when I am taking a shower.

动词'like'后应接动名词形式，故应为'singing'。