Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和断句不连贯的问题。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, I often sing in the shower or when I take a walk.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不完整且重复。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复，并清楚说明原因。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing properly. I find it challenging to hit the right notes and control my pitch.

提案: 回答内容较好，但语法和用词有待改进。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更流畅。

例: It's hard to say, but the first person who comes to mind is my mom. I would like to sing a song for her on Mother's Day to thank her for everything she has done for our family and me.

提案: 回答中断句不连贯，表达不完整。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子流畅，并具体说明原因。

例: Definitely. I think singing is a great way to unwind and express our emotions. It can also help others feel the emotions conveyed through the music.

× Definitely, I found myself always screaming in the shower or while strolling around. As I think it's a good way to unwind and. Outlet my emotions.

✓ Definitely, I find myself always screaming in the shower or while strolling around, as I think it's a good way to unwind and outlet my emotions.

原句中“As I think it's a good way to unwind and. Outlet my emotions.”结构不完整，且“Outlet”用作动词时应小写且与前句连贯。建议合并句子，保持句子完整性和连贯性。

× I think singing a nice songs is a big challenge for me because I always can pitch the. Right? I always can pitch the right and tongue. So I think like.

✓ I think singing nice songs is a big challenge for me because I can't always pitch the right notes. So I think like that.

“a nice songs”中“songs”为复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应改为“nice songs”。“I always can pitch the right?”语序错误，且表达不清，应改为“I can't always pitch the right notes”。

× I think singing a nice songs is a big challenge for me because I always can pitch the. Right?

✓ I think singing nice songs is a big challenge for me because I can't always pitch the right notes.

“a nice songs”中“songs”为复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应改为“nice songs”。

× Who do you want to sing for? It's hard to answer, but the first people pops in my mind is my mom.

✓ It's hard to answer, but the first person who pops into my mind is my mom.

“people”是复数，后面用单数动词“pops”不匹配，应改为单数“person”。同时“pops in my mind”应为“pops into my mind”。

× And I want to sing a song in Mother's Day for her to thank what she contributed in the family and to me.

✓ And I want to sing a song on Mother's Day for her to thank her for what she contributed to the family and to me.

节日用介词应为“on Mother's Day”，感谢某人应用“thank her for”，贡献用“contributed to”。

× For sure. As I think singing is a good way to. Unwind and. Outlet our emotions and also. Let others. Feeling the. Emotions in the sounds to.

✓ For sure. I think singing is a good way to unwind and outlet our emotions, and also let others feel the emotions in the sounds.

原句断句不当，导致句子不完整且难以理解。应合并句子，调整语序，使表达完整流畅。