Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I have' nên là 'I had', và 'I usually singing' nên là 'I usually sing'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I like singing because I have dreamed of becoming a singer since I was a child. I usually sing every evening to practice and improve my skills.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'learn' nên là 'learned' hoặc 'have learned', 'in the Internet' nên là 'on the Internet', và câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching tutorials on the Internet because I don't have much time to attend singing classes. I believe this method helps me improve my singing skills.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít (parent -> parents), thì động từ (wish I can -> wish I could), và cách dùng từ (listening -> listen). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

例: To be honest, I want to sing for my parents because they have always wished that I could become a singer and perform in a big concert for them.

提案: Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn ('reach out' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này), và chú ý ngữ pháp (they really happy -> they are really happy). Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tự nhiên và có liên kết giữa các ý.

例: Absolutely yes. I believe singing helps people relax and unwind after a long day. When I sing for my parents, they feel happy and smile, which makes me very happy too.

× Well, I really enjoy singing because when I was a child I have a big dream.

✓ Well, I really enjoy singing because when I was a child I had a big dream.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Have' should be in past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'.

× When I grow up I will be a singer because I usually singing every evening.

✓ When I grow up I will be a singer because I usually sing every evening.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. It should be the base form 'sing' to indicate habitual action.

× When I grow up I will be a singer because I usually singing every evening.

✓ When I grow up I will be a singer because I usually sing every evening.

After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× Sometimes I learn how to sing in the Internet because I don't have many times to go many class learning singing and I think I can singing well.

✓ Sometimes I learn how to sing on the Internet because I don't have much time to go to many singing classes and I think I can sing well.

'Learn' should be in present tense if referring to habitual action, which is correct here. 'In the Internet' should be 'on the Internet' (preposition error). 'Many times' should be 'much time' (quantifier error). 'Many class' should be 'many classes' (plural). 'Learning singing' is awkward; 'singing classes' is correct. 'Can singing' should be 'can sing' (modal verb + base verb).

× Sometimes I learn how to sing in the Internet because I don't have many times to go many class learning singing and I think I can singing well.

✓ Sometimes I learn how to sing on the Internet because I don't have much time to go to many singing classes and I think I can sing well.

The correct preposition with 'Internet' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'go to' is needed before 'many singing classes'.

× Sometimes I learn how to sing in the Internet because I don't have many times to go many class learning singing and I think I can singing well.

✓ Sometimes I learn how to sing on the Internet because I don't have much time to go to many singing classes and I think I can sing well.

'Many times' is incorrect here; 'much time' is used for uncountable nouns like 'time'.

× Sometimes I learn how to sing in the Internet because I don't have many times to go many class learning singing and I think I can singing well.

✓ Sometimes I learn how to sing on the Internet because I don't have much time to go to many singing classes and I think I can sing well.

'Class' should be plural 'classes' because it refers to multiple classes.

× Sometimes I learn how to sing in the Internet because I don't have many times to go many class learning singing and I think I can singing well.

✓ Sometimes I learn how to sing on the Internet because I don't have much time to go to many singing classes and I think I can sing well.

'Can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'sing', not 'singing'.

× To be honest, I really want to sing for my parent because my parent wish I can be a singer because they want to listening to me in a big concert.

✓ To be honest, I really want to sing for my parents because my parents wish I can be a singer because they want to listen to me in a big concert.

'Parent' should be plural 'parents' because it refers to both mother and father. Also, 'wish' should agree with plural subject 'parents'.

× To be honest, I really want to sing for my parent because my parent wish I can be a singer because they want to listening to me in a big concert.

✓ To be honest, I really want to sing for my parents because my parents wish I can be a singer because they want to listen to me in a big concert.

'Want to listening' is incorrect; after 'want to' the base verb 'listen' should be used.

× To be honest, I really want to sing for my parent because my parent wish I can be a singer because they want to listening to me in a big concert.

✓ To be honest, I really want to sing for my parents because my parents wish I can be a singer because they want to listen to me in a big concert.

'Wish' should be 'wish' for plural subject 'parents' but the sentence is acceptable; however, 'wish' is present tense and matches the context.

× Absolutely yes. I really think singing can help people relax and reach out after a long day.

✓ Absolutely yes. I really think singing can help people relax and reach out after a long day.

No correction needed here; the tense and structure are correct.

× And when I sing for my parent they really happy and smile with me and I love it.

✓ And when I sing for my parents they are really happy and smile with me and I love it.

'Parent' should be plural 'parents'. 'They really happy' is missing the verb 'are' to form the present tense.