Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了原因，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时可以增加一些具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my voice. Also, singing in front of many people makes me feel shy. Therefore, I prefer listening to music instead.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但“didn't learn how to sing informally”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually just sing along to my favorite songs for fun.

提案: 回答过于简短，缺乏内容。建议直接回答问题并尝试补充理由或具体情况，使回答更完整。

例: I don't have a specific person in mind, but I would like to sing for my family because they always support me.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议分句并使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意语法准确。

例: Yes, definitely. I think singing is a great way to relieve stress and feel relaxed. Moreover, singing allows us to express emotions, which can spread happiness to others.

× I prefer listening to music rather than singing music.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

这里的“singing music”不符合习惯表达，应该直接用“singing”表示唱歌的动作。去掉“music”使句子更自然。

× No, I didn't learn how to sing informally.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing formally.

句子中想表达“没有正式学过唱歌”，应使用现在完成时表示过去到现在的经历，同时“informally”用法不当，应改为“formally”表示“正式地”。

× I just listen to some music I like and then sing together along.

✓ I just listen to some music I like and then sing along.

“sing together along”结构不正确，应该用“sing along”表示“跟着唱”。

× So I didn't take the formal classes.

✓ So I didn't take formal classes.

“the formal classes”中的定冠词“the”不必要，去掉更符合习惯表达。

× when you are singing the emotion will be expressed and it will spread happiness to other.

✓ when you are singing, emotion will be expressed and it will spread happiness to others.

“the emotion”不需要定冠词，且“other”应为复数“others”，表示“其他人”。另外，句子中缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更清晰。