Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词形变化。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and makes me feel happy.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达略显冗长。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I have never learned to sing because I see it just as a way to relax, not a skill I need to develop.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，使用正确的语法结构。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she works hard taking care of our family, and I hope my singing can help her relax.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意动词形式和搭配，使用更准确的表达。

例: Of course, many people believe singing is a great way to relax. In China, people often go to KTV to sing with their friends.

× Yes, of course I usually singing in in my accommodation because I think it's a it's way to relax myself and also when I was saying I feel very happy.

✓ Yes, of course I usually sing in my accommodation because I think it's a way to relax myself and also when I am singing I feel very happy.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）时，通常需要有助动词或适当的时态。这里“usually”表示习惯动作，应该用一般现在时动词原形“sing”，而不是“singing”。另外，“when I was saying”应为“when I am singing”，表示正在进行的动作。

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I think it's an unnecessary thing for me because it's just a way to relax and and forget my stress.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think it's an unnecessary thing for me since it's just a way to relax and forget my stress.

这里“because”重复使用，造成句子冗余。虽然语法上不算错误，但建议用“since”替换第二个“because”，使句子更通顺。

× And I want to thank for my mother because I think she's very busy to take taking, taking care of my family. So I want to sing for her and to help to to help her relax and.

✓ I want to thank my mother because I think she's very busy taking care of my family. So I want to sing for her and help her relax.

“thank for”错误，正确用法是“thank someone”；“to take taking, taking care”重复且错误，应为“taking care”；“to help to help”重复，应简化为“help”。

× Of course, a lot of people may think it's a great way to relax themselves. In China, people always want to go to KTV to singing with their friends.

✓ Of course, a lot of people may think it's a great way to relax themselves. In China, people always want to go to KTV to sing with their friends.

“to”后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式“singing”。因此应改为“to sing”。