Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达的意思基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为简单且有重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me relieve stress, especially when I listen to my favorite songs.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，尤其是“don't change brace”部分不明白。建议使用正确的时态和清晰表达学习唱歌的经历。

例: Yes, I attended a music school as a child to learn singing, but I found it quite difficult to master the techniques.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“favorite people”和“sing about love for it for him”。建议用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达。

例: I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is very special to me, and I would like to express my love through songs.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（seeing应为 singing），表达不够自然且用词不准确。建议注意拼写，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because cheerful melodies can uplift people's mood and help them relax.

× I like singing because when I meet my favorite singing song I feel very happy and I think it can release my stress.

✓ I like singing because when I hear my favorite singing song I feel very happy and I think it can release my stress.

句中“meet my favorite singing song”用词不当，歌曲不能用“meet”，应使用“hear”表示听到。

× Yes, when I was a child I went to a music school and learn how to sing, but I think it is so difficult because I don't change brace.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I went to a music school and learned how to sing, but I think it is so difficult because I don't change brace.

句中“learn”应使用过去式“learned”，因为动作发生在过去。

× Yes, when I was a child I went to a music school and learn how to sing, but I think it is so difficult because I don't change brace.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I went to a music school and learned how to sing, but I think it is so difficult because I don't change my brace.

句中“don't change brace”缺少所有格“my”，应为“my brace”。

× I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is my favorite people and I want to sing about love for it for him.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is my favorite person and I want to sing about love for him.

“people”是复数，指多人，句中应使用单数“person”指代单一对象。

× I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is my favorite people and I want to sing about love for it for him.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is my favorite person and I want to sing about love for him.

“sing about love for it for him”中“it”用法错误，应去掉“it”，直接用“for him”。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because some happy sounds can bring well feeling and relax people's stress.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because some happy sounds can bring good feelings and relax people's stress.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“well feeling”应改为“good feelings”，形容词和名词搭配错误。