Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达重复且不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because I believe I have a natural talent for it and it makes me feel happy.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“learn”应为“learned”，且“neutral talent”用词不当，应为“natural talent”。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. I always trust my natural talent.

提案: 回答过于简短且不完整，缺乏具体信息。建议直接回答问题并适当扩展说明原因。

例: I don't have a specific person to sing for, but I enjoy singing for my family and friends.

提案: 用词错误，“faultment”应为“fulfillment”或“comfort”。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it provides comfort and joy to people.

× Because I think my skills of singing is very good, is very is very great.

✓ Because I think my singing skills are very good, are very great.

这里'skills'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× So I think it's I have a Thailand in this.

✓ So I think I have a talent in this.

原句中'Thailand'是地名，显然用错了词，应为'talent'表示才能。

× No, I have never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn'应改为'learned'。

× I always trust my neutral talent.

✓ I always trust my natural talent.

'neutral'意思是中立的，显然用词错误，应为'natural'表示天生的。

× No, no one.

✓ No, no one.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, because I think it's a faultment to people.

✓ Yes, because I think it's a fulfillment to people.

'faultment'不是正确单词，应为'fulfillment'表示满足感。