Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了个人观点，但语言较为简单且重复，建议避免重复使用相同词汇，提升表达的自然流畅度。

例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I find it challenging and I'm not confident in my vocal skills.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的错误（think应为sing），且句子结构不完整，建议注意语法准确性和句子完整性。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to try it sometime in the future.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误（seeing应为singing），建议注意发音和用词准确，同时句子结构应更清晰。

例: I would prefer to sing just for myself because I'm quite shy and don't feel comfortable singing in public.

提案: 回答表达了观点且较为清晰，但缺乏具体细节和连接词，建议增加具体例子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and express their emotions, which can also encourage and motivate them.

× No, I have never learned how to think, but I wanted I want to try it sometime.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to try it sometime.

这里原句中出现了“learned how to think”，应为“learned how to sing”，因为上下文是关于唱歌的。动词时态“have never learned”是现在完成时，表示到目前为止没有学过，符合语境。后半句中“wanted I want”是错误的，应该用现在时“want”，因为表达的是现在的愿望。

× Just for myself, I I think because I'm, I'm a shy person so I don't like seeing in a public place.

✓ Just for myself, I think because I'm a shy person, so I don't like singing in a public place.

原句中“seeing in a public place”中的“seeing”用错了，应该是“singing”，因为谈论的是唱歌。这里是动词的正确形式问题，属于介词使用错误的范畴。

× Just for myself, I I think because I'm, I'm a shy person so I don't like seeing in a public place.

✓ Just for myself, I think because I'm a shy person, so I don't like singing in a public place.

句中重复出现“I I think”，应去掉多余的“I”，保持句子简洁正确。

× No, I have never learned how to think, but I wanted I want to try it sometime.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to try it sometime.

句中“wanted I want”是错误的代词和动词搭配，应改为“I want”，保持主语和动词的一致性。