Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to provide a more natural and complete answer by explaining your feelings about singing and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of just saying you don't like singing because you don't know how, you could add how that affects your enjoyment.

例: I don't really enjoy singing because I haven't learned how to sing properly, so I feel a bit self-conscious when I try.

提案: Avoid repeating previous answers and try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details if needed. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I haven't been interested in learning formally.

提案: Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, clarify your answer by giving more specific details about your friend and why you would sing for them, using linking words to connect ideas.

例: If I had to sing for someone, I would choose my best friend, Lafris Singh, who has been my close companion since childhood because I trust him and want to make him happy.

提案: Try to avoid hesitation and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: In my opinion, singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and helps reduce stress.

× I never visited any singing classes.

✓ I have never visited any singing classes.

The sentence refers to an experience up to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have never visited' is appropriate instead of the simple past 'never visited'. This tense indicates that at no time up to now has the student attended singing classes.

× I would, uh, sing for my best friend, uh, Northeast, who is my childhood friend named Lafris Singh.

✓ I would, uh, sing to my best friend, uh, Northeast, who is my childhood friend named Lafris Singh.

The verb 'sing' is typically followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person who is the recipient of the singing. Using 'for' is less common and can imply singing on behalf of someone rather than directed at them.

× In my opinion, yes, a lot of people like to sing and it uh, uh, it makes them happier and they it is stress Buster for them.

✓ In my opinion, yes, a lot of people like to sing and it makes them happier; it is a stress buster for them.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('uh, uh', repeated 'it', 'they it') causing confusion. Removing fillers and correcting the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'stress buster' should be lowercase unless part of a title.