Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达。

例: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel happy and confident whenever I sing.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱且含糊。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体时间长度。

例: Yes, I took singing lessons for about three months when I was a child.

提案: 回答中表达不够清楚，句子结构混乱。建议明确表达想为谁唱歌，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

例: I want to sing for both myself and others because singing helps me express my feelings and understand myself better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的时态和句子结构，清晰表达观点。

例: Of course, singing makes me happy, and I believe it can bring joy to others when they listen to my songs.

× I love singing so much because I think songs makes me happy and every time I when I was when I was saying I think I'm confident.

✓ I love singing so much because I think songs make me happy and every time I sing I think I'm confident.

这里'songs'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'make'，而不是单数形式'makes'。此外，句中'time I when I was when I was saying'结构混乱，应简化为'time I sing'。

× I think songs makes me happy and every time I when I was when I was saying I think I'm confident.

✓ I think songs make me happy and every time I sing I think I'm confident.

主语'songs'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'make'，而不是单数形式'makes'。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my childhood for three months.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my childhood for three months.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作，使用一般过去时'learned'更合适，而不是现在完成时'have learned'。

× No, no, no, maybe maybe 3 or 4 times. And which time is 3 months or two months?

✓ No, no, no, maybe 3 or 4 times. And the duration was 3 months or two months?

句子结构不完整且时态混乱，应明确表达过去的次数和持续时间，使用一般过去时。

× I want to sing for everyone or just for myself, because when I was born to sing, I just want to explain myself.

✓ I want to sing for everyone or just for myself, because I was born to sing, I just want to express myself.

'when I was born to sing'用法错误，应改为'I was born to sing'。此外，'explain myself'应为'express myself'更符合表达意图。

× because when I was saying I feel so happy and a lot of people listen to me for singing a song they can enjoy for my things, so I think they also happy.

✓ because when I sing I feel so happy and a lot of people listen to me singing a song, they can enjoy it, so I think they are also happy.

'when I was saying'时态错误，应为一般现在时'when I sing'。'they also happy'缺少动词，应为'they are also happy'。此外，句子结构需调整使其更通顺。