Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: សូមប្រើវាក្យសព្ទដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគឲ្យត្រឹមត្រូវ ដូចជា "it makes me feel" ជំនួស "it's had me feel" ហើយព្យាយាមប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលធម្មតា និងច្បាស់លាស់។

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed, refreshed, and less stressed. I often sing alone during karaoke sessions in my room.

提案: សូមប្រើពាក្យ "an instrument" ជំនួស "instrument" ហើយព្យាយាមបន្ថែមពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគល្អ។

例: No, I've never learned how to sing. I prefer listening to music instead because I'm not very confident in my singing ability. I focus more on playing an instrument.

提案: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពាក្យ "have always supported me" ជំនួស "have always support me"។ ក៏ដូចជាប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលច្បាស់លាស់។

例: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me. For example, when I sing for them, I feel relaxed and happier.

提案: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពាក្យ "feel sorry about" គួរតែជាពាក្យ "feel bad about" ឬ "are not confident in"។ ក៏ដូចជាប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ។

例: No, I don't think singing brings happiness to everyone. For example, some people are not confident in their singing skills and might prefer listening to music or playing instruments like the guitar and piano instead.

× Yes, I like singing because it's had me feel relaxed, fresh, better and less stressed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed, fresh, better and less stressed.

The phrase 'it's had me feel' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'it makes me feel' to express causing a feeling. 'Make' is a causative verb followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'.

× I focus more on playing instrument.

✓ I focus more on playing instruments.

The noun 'instrument' should be plural 'instruments' because it refers to musical instruments in general, which is a countable noun and usually plural in this context.

× I want to sing for my family because they have always support me.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me.

The verb 'support' should be in the past participle form 'supported' to agree with the present perfect tense 'have always supported'.

× For example, when I sing for them I feel relaxed, feel better.

✓ For example, when I sing for them, I feel relaxed and better.

The sentence lacks a conjunction 'and' to connect 'feel relaxed' and 'feel better'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause 'when I sing for them' for clarity.

× No, I don't think singing brings happiness to people.

✓ No, I don't think singing can bring happiness to people.

Using 'can' expresses possibility or ability, which fits better when discussing whether singing can bring happiness. 'Brings' is present simple and implies certainty, which may not be intended here.

× For example, some people feel sorry about their singing skills and they might prefer listening to music instead, like play guitar and piano.

✓ For example, some people feel sorry about their singing skills and they might prefer listening to music instead, like playing guitar and piano.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form 'playing' to indicate activities. 'Play' is incorrect here because it does not match the gerund form required after 'like'.